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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #6152 Urban Population R1
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As the urban population is growing, city roads have become busy, and public areas such as parking are packed. People feel that city space is overcrowding. What solutions can you think about this problem?

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As the urban population is growing, city roads have become busy, and public areas such as parking are packed. People feel that city space is overcrowding. What solutions can you think about this problem?
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Rapid urban population growth has intensified pressure on city infrastructure, leaving roads busy and public space overcrowded. In particular, this overcrowding problem undermines mobility and liveability, so an effective solution requires transport reform and smarter use of urban land. On the whole, in my opinion, the debate over city congestion demands policy, planning, and community awareness rather than simple expansion.

Moreover, the most impactful solution is to reduce private car dependence through better public transport and travel management. For instance, expanding reliable metro, bus, and bike lanes encourages residents to shift away from cars, easing road congestion and parking demand. Furthermore, congestion charges and priority bus lanes discourage unnecessary car use, so daily traffic in the busy city falls sharply. Consequently, when commuting by public transport becomes faster and cheaper, urban traffic volumes drop, freeing space for people and pedestrians.

In addition, a second solution lies in more efficient planning of urban space, particularly parking and land use through zoning. Indeed, cities can replace large surface parking with multi-storey facilities, mixed-use developments, or green space that serves more people. Admittedly, technology such as smart parking and stricter street-parking limits also reduces the traffic that drivers create while searching for space.

In conclusion, urban overcrowding is best addressed by limiting car reliance and optimising land use through coherent policy and sustainability. Ultimately, together these strategies reclaim city space, ease congestion, and create more accessible and liveable urban areas for the whole community.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear plan to fix city overcrowding through transport and better land use. The example of metro, bus, and bike lanes gives strong support. an effective solution requires transport reform and smarter use of urban landexpanding reliable metro, bus, and bike lanes encourages residents to shift away from cars
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses many clear connectors to open ideas and show results. They make the solutions easy to follow. In particularMoreoverFor instanceConsequentlyIn additionIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer handles complex clauses with ease, such as a time clause and a concessive clause. The meaning stays clear. when commuting by public transport becomes faster and cheaper, urban traffic volumes dropAdmittedly, technology such as smart parking and stricter street-parking limits
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe complex sentence here is accurate and well controlled with a result clause. It reads naturally. congestion charges and priority bus lanes discourage unnecessary car use, so daily traffic in the busy city falls
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses precise urban planning words and good collocations. These show a broad vocabulary. city infrastructurecar dependencemixed-use developmentsliveable urban areas
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly, including liveability and pedestrians. This is careful spelling. liveabilitypedestrians
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 241 words, which falls inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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