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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #6150 Global Warming R1
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Scientists believe that the increasing average temperature is an issue. What has caused global warming and present solutions to reduce its effect?

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Scientists believe that the increasing average temperature is an issue. What has caused global warming and present solutions to reduce its effect?
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Rising average global temperatures have become a serious environmental challenge because they endanger ecosystems, economic stability, and human health. Scientists largely attribute this trend to human actions rather than natural climatic cycles. This essay argues that greenhouse gas emissions and unsustainable land use are the principal causes of global warming, and that effective solutions depend on energy reform and improved environmental management.

The primary driver of global warming is the extensive emission of greenhouse gases from the combustion of fossil fuels for power generation, transportation, and industry. Carbon dioxide and similar gases accumulate in the atmosphere and trap heat, strengthening the greenhouse effect. This problem is intensified by deforestation, which removes natural carbon sinks when land is cleared for agriculture or urban expansion, leading to higher net emissions.

Reducing the impact of global warming requires decisive mitigation strategies. A major solution involves accelerating the shift towards renewable energy sources such as wind and solar, which significantly lower emissions at their origin. Furthermore, governments should enforce sustainable land-use policies, including reforestation and tighter controls on industrial pollution, in order to moderate long-term temperature increases.

In conclusion, global warming is mainly the result of human-generated emissions and widespread deforestation rather than unavoidable natural processes. Tackling this issue demands aligned technological innovation and responsible policy decisions. By transforming energy systems and conserving forests, societies are able to slow temperature growth and limit the most harmful consequences of climate change.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer names the causes of global warming and then gives clear solutions. The point about renewable energy like wind and solar gives strong, specific support. greenhouse gas emissions and unsustainable land use are the principal causes of global warmingaccelerating the shift towards renewable energy sources such as wind and solar
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay guides the reader with clear connectors and paragraph openers. This keeps the causes and solutions well ordered. The primary driverThis problem is intensified byA major solutionFurthermoreIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex structures with ease, such as a relative clause and a purpose clause. The meaning stays clear. deforestation, which removes natural carbon sinks when land is clearedin order to moderate long-term temperature increases
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe complex sentence here is accurate and well controlled with a subordinate clause. It reads naturally. Scientists largely attribute this trend to human actions rather than natural climatic cycles
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses precise scientific words and good collocations. These show a broad vocabulary. greenhouse effectcarbon sinksrenewable energy sourcessustainable land-use policies
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly, including endanger and combustion. This is careful spelling. endangercombustion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 236 words, which sits inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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