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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #6137 National Happiness Index R1
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More people consider ‘national happiness index’ as a better measurement for a country’s success than the country’s economic growth. What do you think about the idea? What can be used to measure ‘national happiness’?

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More people consider ‘national happiness index’ as a better measurement for a country’s success than the country’s economic growth. What do you think about the idea? What can be used to measure ‘national happiness’?
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Many societies increasingly question whether economic growth alone captures a nation's success. While gross domestic product reflects production and income, it clearly overlooks lived experience. In fact, I agree that a national happiness index provides a more meaningful assessment, provided it is measured carefully and used alongside economic indicators rather than replacing them entirely.

First, economic growth can rise even as social stress, inequality, and environmental damage intensify. A happiness-based approach therefore shifts policy attention towards wellbeing, mental health, social trust, and work-life balance, which directly affect citizens' quality of life. For example, a country with moderate income but strong public services and community cohesion may often deliver greater life satisfaction than a wealthier yet fragmented society. Focusing on happiness consequently encourages sustainable development instead of short-term expansion.

Second, measuring national happiness generally requires a combination of subjective and objective indicators. Surveys of life satisfaction and emotional wellbeing capture personal perceptions, which are essential to understanding happiness. Moreover, these should be complemented by data on health outcomes, educational access, employment security, environmental quality, and social participation. Indeed, when combined, such measures reduce bias and provide governments with actionable insights rather than vague sentiment. Research also suggests that balanced indicators improve public trust.

In conclusion, national happiness is undoubtedly a valuable lens through which to judge a country's progress, because it reflects real human outcomes. Therefore, when measured through balanced indicators and considered alongside economic growth, it offers a more comprehensive and humane definition of national success.

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  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer states a clear opinion and reshapes the topic in their own words. An example about a moderate-income country supports the idea. I agree that a national happiness index provides a more meaningful assessmenta country with moderate income but strong public services and community cohesion
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses varied linking words to open ideas, so the two questions are answered in a clear order. FirstFor exampleSecondMoreoverIndeedIn conclusion
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses a which clause and a provided-that clause to build complex sentences. The meaning is clear. which directly affect citizens' quality of lifeprovided it is measured carefully
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis concessive sentence joins contrasting ideas correctly and clearly. economic growth can rise even as social stress, inequality, and environmental damage intensify
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and strong collocations. gross domestic productsocial trustsustainable developmentwork-life balance
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly, including these words. wellbeingparticipation
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 246 words, inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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