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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #6132 Parenting R1
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Is parenting important to children?

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Is parenting important to children?
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Whether children develop into capable and resilient adults depends heavily on the quality of parenting and family care they receive. In particular, good parenting shapes early behaviour, values, and emotional health in ways that no other institution can fully replace. Moreover, I strongly agree that proper parenting is important for children, even in societies with advanced education and welfare systems.

For instance, parents provide the primary environment in which children learn discipline, manners, and moral judgement through daily nurturing and care. Furthermore, consistent guidance and upbringing at home help children regulate emotions, which strongly influences their behaviour and future. Indeed, children who receive supportive but firm parenting often show better concentration and mental wellbeing, proving the importance of family nurturing.

Admittedly, some argue that institutions or peers can compensate for weak parenting, thereby reducing the importance of a good upbringing. However, this challenge to parenting overlooks how parents interpret experiences for their children, model values, and build strong relationships. Consequently, without effective parenting, external support often lacks coherence, harming the growth, health, and intelligence of young children.

In conclusion, parenting remains fundamental to the emotional, social, and behavioural development of children and their nurture. Ultimately, through daily care, guidance, and example, the nurturing that a family provides remains one of the most decisive influences on children.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a strong, clear opinion and restates the topic in their own words. A daily-life example shows how parents help children. I strongly agree that proper parenting is important for childrenchildren learn discipline, manners, and moral judgement through daily nurturing and care
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itEach idea opens with a clear linking word, so the essay flows in a logical order. In particularFurthermoreIndeedAdmittedlyHoweverIn conclusion
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses a relative clause and a concession well. The meaning stays completely clear. which strongly influences their behaviour and futureeven in societies with advanced education and welfare systems
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence uses a participle clause correctly to add extra meaning. children who receive supportive but firm parenting often show better concentration
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise words and warm, natural word pairs. emotional healthconsistent guidanceregulate emotionsmental wellbeing
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly, including these British forms. behaviouralrelationships
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 216 words, inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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