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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #6124 City Life R1
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People are moving from rural areas to big cities for a better life. Is it good or bad?

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People are moving from rural areas to big cities for a better life. Is it good or bad?
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Migration from rural areas to major cities has accelerated as people pursue employment, education, and reliable healthcare services. In my opinion, although this movement generates visible pressures, it is broadly beneficial because it widens the employment opportunities and social mobility of rural people. Indeed, the costs of migration are tangible but manageable through policy, while the benefits for urban life are structural and long-term. Historically, this urbanisation and rural-to-urban movement has underpinned national development.

First, urban concentration lifts productivity by matching skills with employment and workers with modern infrastructure in cities. Specifically, large cities provide diversified jobs, higher living standards, and rapid education for people through proximity and competition. For instance, a rural graduate entering a metropolitan city can access specialised training and career networks, raising lifetime earnings and improving their livelihood and life.

However, opponents contend that rural depopulation erodes the countryside community and that megacities face congestion, housing shortages, and inequality. Admittedly, these concerns about urban areas are legitimate, but they stem mainly from governance failures rather than migration itself. Moreover, targeted investment in regional connectivity, healthcare and affordable housing can ease urban congestion, while remittances help reinvigorate the rural countryside and its livelihood.

Overall, moving from rural areas to big cities is more good than bad because it unlocks career advancement and long-term growth for people. Therefore, with supportive policy, cities can absorb rural newcomers productively and share employment gains across society. Ultimately, the appropriate response is not to resist this migration, but to manage urbanisation so both urban and rural life can prosper together.

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  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay gives a clear opinion and supports it with an example. It says migration is broadly good and shows why with the rural graduate example. it is broadly beneficial because it widens the employment opportunities and social mobilitya rural graduate entering a metropolitan city can access specialised training and career networks
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay is well linked with clear connecting words. These devices help the reader follow the flow of ideas. FirstSpecificallyHoweverMoreoverUltimately
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with ease. These add a contrast and a reason smoothly. although this movement generates visible pressuresbut they stem mainly from governance failures rather than migration itself
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itComplex grammar is controlled well. This concessive plus main clause is accurate. while the benefits for urban life are structural and long-term
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and collocations. regional connectivityurban concentrationhousing shortagescareer advancement
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including the British form. urbanisationproductivity
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 258 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four paragraph essay.
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