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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #6005 Education R1
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'Qualifications benefit individuals; therefore, governments should make individuals meet the full costs of their education.' Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

* Write your essay below (between 200 and 300 words)

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'Qualifications benefit individuals; therefore, governments should make individuals meet the full costs of their education.' Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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Formal qualifications often raise personal income and career mobility, leading some to argue that learners should pay the full price of education. However, I disagree with this view. While individuals gain private returns, education also generates substantial public benefits that justify continued government funding alongside reasonable personal contributions.

First, a skilled and educated population underpins economic productivity, innovation, and tax revenue, outcomes that extend beyond any single graduate. Public investment in universities and vocational training helps address skill shortages in sectors such as healthcare and engineering, reducing recruitment costs and improving service quality. These spillover effects mean society shares the returns, so expecting students to shoulder all costs would underinvest in national capacity.

Second, full-cost funding risks entrenching inequality by deterring capable students from low-income backgrounds. Even with loans, high fees increase debt aversion and narrow participation, wasting talent and weakening social mobility. Although graduates benefit personally, a balanced model that combines public subsidy with means-tested fees aligns incentives while preserving access and fairness.

Overall, the claim that individuals alone should finance education overlooks its collective value. Because qualifications strengthen the economy and social cohesion, governments should share costs rather than withdraw support entirely. A mixed funding approach recognises private gains without sacrificing public prosperity.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay gives a clear opinion and supports it well. It disagrees with full-cost fees and shows why with the point about public benefits. However, I disagree with this vieweducation also generates substantial public benefits that justify continued government funding
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay is well linked with clear ordering words. These devices guide the reader from point to point. FirstSecondOverallBecauseEven with loans
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with ease and precision. These add a condition and a contrast smoothly. While individuals gain private returnsso expecting students to shoulder all costs would underinvest in national capacity
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itComplex grammar is handled well. This concessive plus main clause structure is accurate. Although graduates benefit personally, a balanced model
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and strong collocations. economic productivityspillover effectssocial mobilitymeans-tested fees
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including the British form. recognisesprosperity
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 205 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four paragraph essay.
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