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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #5233 Tour and Travelling R1
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Tourism industry brings more disadvantages to a country than benefits. How far do you agree with this opinion? You can use your examples to argue.

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Tourism industry brings more disadvantages to a country than benefits. How far do you agree with this opinion? You can use your examples to argue.
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Claims that tourism harms countries more than it helps overlook its substantial economic and social contributions. Although poorly managed tourism can create pressure on resources and communities, I largely disagree with the view that its disadvantages outweigh its benefits, because well-governed tourism generates income, employment, and cultural exchange that support long-term national development.

Economic gains represent the strongest advantage. Tourism diversifies national revenue, supports small and medium enterprises, and brings foreign currency without the need for heavy industrial investment. Local accommodation, transport, and food services usually expand alongside visitor numbers, spreading income beyond capital cities and major resorts. Consequently, governments increase their tax base and are better able to fund infrastructure, healthcare, and education, making tourism a practical driver of inclusive growth.

Critics argue that tourism damages the environment and distorts local culture, which is a legitimate concern where regulation is weak. However, these risks can be reduced through effective planning, limits on visitor numbers, and reinvestment in conservation. Heritage sites that charge entry fees often finance preservation and community projects, while cultural interaction can reinforce traditions by giving them sustainable economic value. In this sense, many disadvantages arise from poor governance rather than from tourism itself.

In conclusion, although tourism can impose environmental and social costs, these generally do not exceed its benefits. With responsible management, the industry delivers sustainable income, employment opportunities, and cultural vitality. I therefore believe tourism is more beneficial than harmful for countries that prioritise balanced development.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay gives a clear opinion and backs it with real support. It says the writer disagrees that tourism does more harm than good, and it shows why with points like heritage entry fees paying for preservation. I largely disagree with the view that its disadvantages outweigh its benefitsHeritage sites that charge entry fees often finance preservation and community projects
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe ideas move in a clear order with helpful linking words. Words like these guide the reader smoothly from one point to the next. ConsequentlyHoweverIn this senseIn conclusionAlthough
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with ease. These sentences join a contrast idea and a reason together clearly. because well-governed tourism generates income, employment, and cultural exchangewhich is a legitimate concern where regulation is weak
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe writer controls complex grammar well. This part uses a smooth passive plus reason structure with no errors. these risks can be reduced through effective planning
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and strong word pairs. inclusive growthforeign currencynational developmentcultural vitality
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout, including the British form. prioritiseinfrastructure
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 242 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four paragraph essay.
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