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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #49027 Economic Globalization
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Economic globalization has been a predominant phenomenon now. What problems may it cause? Please list some of them.

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Economic globalization has been a predominant phenomenon now. What problems may it cause? Please list some of them.
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Economic globalisation has become a defining phenomenon of the modern economy, integrating markets, labour, and capital across borders at unprecedented speed. Although this economic phenomenon has stimulated trade and competition, it also generates serious problems that challenge social cohesion, economic fairness, and national autonomy. These economic problems require critical examination rather than automatic acceptance.

First, one major problem of economic globalisation is the widening of inequality within and between economies. Global competition frequently benefits large multinational businesses, while low-skilled workers face wage stagnation and job displacement. For example, manufacturing businesses can shift to lower-cost regions, and this leaves workers in developed economies without a job and their communities economically weakened. Consequently, as wealth concentrates among a small global elite, the economic tensions and dissatisfaction that this phenomenon creates tend to intensify.

Furthermore, another serious problem concerns the erosion of national sovereignty and the economic regulation that governs business. Governments may feel pressured to reduce labour standards and corporate taxes to remain attractive to foreign business investment. Moreover, this competitive economic pressure can undermine the public welfare and job security that citizens expect. Indeed, excessive reliance on global supply chains exposes each economy to external shocks, as the widespread problems during recent crises have shown.

In conclusion, the phenomenon of economic globalisation can produce profound problems, including inequality, weakened regulation, and heightened economic vulnerability. Without effective collaboration and robust economic policies, these problems may outweigh the benefits, and global competition may leave every economy socially divisive and unstable.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer argues that globalisation creates real problems like inequality and gives an example about factories moving away. The main idea and support are both clear. one major problem of economic globalisation is the widening of inequality within and between economiesmanufacturing businesses can shift to lower-cost regions
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses clear order words and adding markers across its paragraphs. The ideas connect smoothly. First,For example,Consequently,Furthermore,In conclusion,
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with concession and reason clauses. The meaning stays clear. Although this economic phenomenon has stimulated trade and competition, it also generates serious problemsas the widespread problems during recent crises have shown
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis complex sentence about competition is built correctly and reads well. The grammar is controlled. Global competition frequently benefits large multinational businesses, while low-skilled workers face wage stagnation
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and pairings like social cohesion and wage stagnation. This shows a wide word range. social cohesionwage stagnationnational sovereignty
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itWords are spelled correctly, including the British form globalisation. Spelling is accurate. globalisationvulnerability
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 247 words and a clear four-paragraph shape with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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