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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #48271 Take Risks
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Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. What is your opinion?

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Some people like to do only what they already do well. Other people prefer to try new things and take risks. What is your opinion?
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People differ in whether they prefer to rely on established strengths or to experiment with unfamiliar activities. While focusing on proven skills offers comfort and efficiency, I believe that trying new things and accepting measured risks is generally more beneficial. This approach better supports personal growth and long-term adaptability.

Taking risks exposes individuals to learning that cannot occur within routine competence. New tasks force the development of problem-solving, resilience, and transferable skills, which remain valuable even if initial attempts fail. For example, an employee who volunteers for an unfamiliar project may struggle at first but gains broader insight and versatility. Over time, such experiences increase confidence and expand career opportunities.

Admittedly, concentrating on existing abilities can produce short-term success and reduce failure. Specialists often achieve high performance by refining what they already do well, and this can be appropriate in stable environments. However, exclusive reliance on comfort zones can lead to stagnation, making people vulnerable when circumstances change or familiar skills lose relevance.

In conclusion, although mastery of current strengths has practical advantages, a willingness to try new activities and take calculated risks is more valuable overall. It promotes continuous learning, flexibility, and preparedness for change. Therefore, risk-taking, when approached thoughtfully, should be preferred over doing only what is already familiar.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer clearly prefers trying new things with measured risk, and gives an example of an employee who volunteers for an unfamiliar project. I believe that trying new things and accepting measured risks is generally more beneficialan employee who volunteers for an unfamiliar project may struggle at first
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itClear linking words open the stages and guide the reader through the argument. While focusing on proven skillsFor example,Admittedly,However,In conclusion,Therefore,
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses concessive and conditional clauses with precision. which remain valuable even if initial attempts failalthough mastery of current strengths has practical advantages
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itA complex clause with a relative part is built correctly. learning that cannot occur within routine competence
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words about growth and change. long-term adaptabilitytransferable skillscomfort zonescalculated risks
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly. resiliencestagnation
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 211 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range, and it is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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