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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #48270 Life Success
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Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. What is your opinion about success?

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Some people believe that success in life comes from taking risks or chances. Others believe that success results from careful planning. What is your opinion about success?
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Debate persists over whether achievement is driven by bold risk taking or by systematic preparation. While chance can open doors, I contend that sustained success is more reliably produced through careful planning combined with measured risks. Planning creates direction and resilience, whereas impulsive gambles often depend on luck rather than skill.

Careful planning enables individuals to set realistic goals, allocate resources efficiently, and anticipate obstacles. By analysing options and consequences, people reduce avoidable failure and can adjust strategies when conditions change. For example, entrepreneurs who research markets and manage to control cash flow are more likely to survive early losses and grow steadily. Such preparation turns effort into progress and ensures that success is repeatable rather than accidental.

Advocates of risk taking argue that major breakthroughs require bold decisions, and this is partly valid. Innovation often involves uncertainty, and excessive caution can limit opportunity. However, risks that are not informed by planning frequently result in severe losses. Calculated risk, grounded in evidence and timing, is different from reckless chance. When planning frame risks, individuals can act decisively while protecting long-term objectives.

In conclusion, although taking chances can trigger rapid gains, lasting success is best achieved through careful planning that incorporates selective risk. Planning provides structure, learning, and control, allowing opportunities to be seized intelligently. Therefore, success should be viewed not as a product of luck, but as the outcome of disciplined preparation and strategic action.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer takes a clear view that planning with measured risk brings success, and gives an example of entrepreneurs who research markets. I contend that sustained success is more reliably produced through careful planningentrepreneurs who research markets and manage to control cash flow
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itClear linking words open the stages and connect the ideas across paragraphs. whereas impulsive gamblesFor example,However,In conclusion,Therefore,
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses contrast and conditional clauses with ease and precision. While chance can open doorsWhen planning frame risks, individuals can act decisively
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itA complex clause with a present participle opener is handled accurately. By analysing options and consequences, people reduce avoidable failure
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and natural word pairs. systematic preparationallocate resources efficientlyCalculated risklong-term objectives
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly, including the British form. analysingdisciplined
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 235 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range, and it is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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