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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #48268 External Appearance
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One should never judge a person by external appearances. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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One should never judge a person by external appearances. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
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Judging individuals based solely on outward appearance is a common but flawed human tendency. While visual cues can offer limited information in specific contexts, I strongly agree that people should not be evaluated primarily by how they look. Character, competence, and values are far more reliable indicators of a person's true worth and potential.

The main reason external appearances are unreliable is that they are easily shaped by circumstance rather than intention. Clothing, physical features, or mannerisms often reflect culture, economic background, or professional requirements, not personality or ability. For example, a casually dressed job candidate may possess exceptional expertise and discipline, yet be overlooked in favour of someone who merely conforms to visual expectations. Such superficial judgement can lead to discrimination and the loss of genuine talent.

Admittedly, appearances can sometimes provide practical signals, such as uniforms indicating professional roles or hygiene suggesting self-care. However, these signals are situational and should only function as preliminary observations, not final conclusions. When people rely excessively on appearance, they risk reinforcing stereotypes and making inaccurate assumptions, particularly in multicultural societies where norms of dress and expression differ widely.

In conclusion, although external appearance may offer limited contextual clues, it is an unsound basis for judging a person's character or capability. A fair and rational assessment requires attention to behaviour, actions, and demonstrated skills. Therefore, I strongly agree that individuals should not be judged by appearances, as doing so undermines fairness and informed decision-making.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer strongly agrees that people should not be judged by looks, and gives an example of a casually dressed candidate being overlooked. I strongly agree that people should not be evaluated primarily by how they looka casually dressed job candidate may possess exceptional expertise
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itClear linking words open each stage and guide the reader through the argument. For example,Admittedly,However,In conclusion,Therefore,
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses concessive and contrast clauses to weigh both sides with ease. While visual cues can offer limited information in specific contextsyet be overlooked in favour of someone who merely conforms
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itA complex clause with a relative part is handled accurately. particularly in multicultural societies where norms of dress and expression differ
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and natural word pairs. superficial judgementreinforcing stereotypeseconomic backgroundinformed decision-making
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly, including the British form. favourcapability
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 241 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range, and it is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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