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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #48265 Work for Whom
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Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. What do you think?

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Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. What do you think?
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Many people face a choice between running a business of their own and working as an employee for a company. While a business promises independence, I believe working for an employer suits most people better across a long career. This view rests on the stability, structured development and shared responsibility that a good company offers its employees.

The strongest advantage of working for an employer is the income security that a steady job provides most people. Regular salaries and benefits let an employee plan housing and family life, which a fragile new business rarely allows an entrepreneur. For example, a graduate joining an established company gains predictable pay while learning the professional standards of the firm. This stability lets employees build a career instead of gambling everything on one uncertain business.

Advocates of self-employment argue that owning a business rewards people with freedom and higher earnings. However, running a firm burdens the entrepreneur with irregular cash flow and personal liability that few people can shoulder alone. In contrast, a company supplies the mentoring, teamwork and capital that individual business owners struggle to secure. As a result, an employee can specialise and advance faster within the clear career pathways that a large firm maintains.

Overall, although entrepreneurship suits a minority of people with resources and an appetite for risk, employment offers broader advantages. Financial security, professional development and collaborative work make a job with a good employer sustainable for most people. Therefore, I favour working for an employer, since a stable company remains a more reliable choice than launching one's own business for the majority of workers.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay gives a clear opinion that working for an employer suits most people, and it backs this with a real example about a graduate joining a company. I believe working for an employer suits most people better across a long careera graduate joining an established company gains predictable pay
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe writer links ideas with clear connecting words at the start of sentences, so the argument flows step by step. For example,However,In contrast,As a result,Overall,Therefore,
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses complex sentences with joined and contrasting clauses, and the meaning stays fully clear. While a business promises independence, I believealthough entrepreneurship suits a minority of people with resources
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe writer controls a relative clause correctly, which shows strong grammar. which a fragile new business rarely allows an entrepreneur
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise work-related words and natural word pairs. income securityirregular cash flowpersonal liabilityclear career pathways
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly, including the British form. specialiseentrepreneur
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 266 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range, and it is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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