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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #48264 Old Buildings
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Some think a city should try to preserve its old, historic buildings. Others think a city should destroy them and replace them with modern buildings. What is your opinion?

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Some think a city should try to preserve its old, historic buildings. Others think a city should destroy them and replace them with modern buildings. What is your opinion?
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Modern cities increasingly struggle to modernise while maintaining a distinct identity, and historic buildings lie at the very heart of this important debate. Although contemporary architecture can enhance efficiency and capacity, we firmly believe that a city should prioritise preserving its older structures. Consequently, the protection of heritage safeguards cultural continuity and can operate alongside carefully planned modern development.

The strongest argument for preservation is that historic buildings embody the collective memory and local character that a modern city cannot reproduce. Moreover, these iconic structures shape a city's identity, encourage tourism, and strengthen the civic pride that residents share. For instance, rejuvenated heritage quarters often attract visitors and small enterprises, and they stimulate economic activity without erasing historical meaning. However, removing these buildings weakens social cohesion and risks turning our historic city into a uniform environment.

Admittedly, advocates of demolition contend that modern buildings offer higher density and better environmental performance. This concern, however, is not decisive because adaptive reuse can upgrade older structures and preserve heritage while meeting current standards. Furthermore, thoughtful retrofitting enhances efficiency and yet retains the external features that make our city architecture more humane. Therefore, widespread replacement frequently favours short-term commercial gain over the long-term quality that historic development should protect.

In conclusion, although modern construction has a legitimate role, it should support rather than displace our historic architecture and monuments. Preserving older buildings sustains the cultural identity and economic vitality that every city needs. Ultimately, a city that can balance conservation with modern innovation will create environments that remain meaningful for future generations.

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  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay gives a clear opinion and expands it with a real example. The heritage-quarters example adds specific support. we firmly believe that a city should prioritise preserving its older structuresrejuvenated heritage quarters often attract visitors and small enterprises
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses many linkers to open ideas in order. These connect the argument smoothly. Moreover,For instance,However,Furthermore,In conclusion,
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses complex clauses with ease. The relative clause and the concessive idea keep the meaning clear. that a modern city cannot reproduceAlthough contemporary architecture can enhance efficiency and capacity
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itOne accurate complex sentence links a claim to a because-clause. The control is consistent. This concern, however, is not decisive because adaptive reuse can upgrade older structures
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay chooses precise words and natural collocations. They show a broad lexical range. collective memorycivic pridesocial cohesionadaptive reuse
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly, including British forms. Two clear examples are shown. modernisehumane
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 259 words, which sits inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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