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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #48263 Classmate or Parent
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Classmates have a more important influence than parents on a child’s success in school. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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Classmates have a more important influence than parents on a child’s success in school. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
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Whether classmates outweigh parents in shaping academic success remains contested. I largely disagree, because parental influence establishes the foundations for learning, whereas class-based effects are secondary and context-dependent. Parents shape early habits, values, and expectations that endure across schooling, while classmates mainly affect short-term motivation and behaviour.

First, parents exert sustained control over learning conditions beyond the classroom. They organise routines, support literacy and numeracy, and signal the importance of effort and discipline. For instance, regular parental monitoring of homework and reading develops self-regulation, which strongly predicts achievement across subjects. This guidance accumulates over many years, making parental influence durable and transferable between teachers, classes, and schools.

Admittedly, classmates can influence engagement through norms, competition, and collaboration. Supportive groups may encourage participation and persistence, whereas disruptive ones can distract from study. Nevertheless, these effects fluctuate with class composition and age, and they are frequently moderated by parental supervision and school rules. As a result, classroom influence tends to amplify or weaken existing habits rather than create them independently.

In conclusion, although classmates shape daily experiences at school, parents have a stronger and more enduring impact on academic success. By establishing learning routines, values, and support systems at home, parents set educational trajectories that classmates merely modify. Therefore, I disagree to a large extent with the claim that classmates are more influential than parents.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay states a clear position and expands it with a real example. The homework-monitoring example adds specific support. I largely disagree, because parental influence establishes the foundations for learningregular parental monitoring of homework and reading develops self-regulation
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses linkers to open ideas and to contrast them. This keeps both sides in clear order. First,For instance,Admittedly,Nevertheless,In conclusion,
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses complex clauses with ease. The whereas-contrast and the relative clause stay clear. whereas class-based effects are secondary and context-dependentwhich strongly predicts achievement across subjects
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itOne accurate complex sentence uses a concessive clause with correct control. The grammar is hard to fault. although classmates shape daily experiences at school, parents have a stronger and more enduring impact
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay chooses precise academic words and natural collocations. They show a broad lexical range. context-dependentself-regulationclass compositioneducational trajectories
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly across the essay. Two clear examples are shown. numeracyenduring
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 223 words, which sits inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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