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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #48262 Marks
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Marks encourage students to learn. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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Marks encourage students to learn. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
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Assessment through marks is a long-standing feature of formal education, intended to measure achievement and guide progression. I largely agree that marks can encourage students to learn, because they provide clear goals and feedback, although their motivational effect is limited when used as the sole driver of learning.

First, marks motivate by clarifying expectations and rewarding effort. When criteria are transparent, students can align study strategies with outcomes, which increases persistence. For example, regular quizzes with grades often prompt consistent revision rather than last-minute cramming, leading to deeper understanding and improved academic discipline. This structured incentive is especially effective for younger learners who are still developing self-regulation.

However, critics argue that marks can undermine intrinsic motivation and promote superficial learning. This risk is real when assessment emphasises ranking over mastery, as students may rote-learn content to secure high scores. Nevertheless, when combined with formative feedback and varied tasks, grades signal progress without eclipsing curiosity, thereby sustaining engagement while maintaining academic standards.

In conclusion, marks do encourage learning to a considerable extent by setting targets and reinforcing effort. Their impact is strongest when assessments are well-designed and supplemented by feedback. Therefore, marks should be used as supportive tools within a broader educational approach, not as the only measure of student success.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay gives a clear opinion and expands it with a real example. The quizzes example adds specific support. I largely agree that marks can encourage students to learnregular quizzes with grades often prompt consistent revision rather than last-minute cramming
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses linkers to open and connect ideas in order. These guide the reader through both sides. First,For example,However,Nevertheless,In conclusion,
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses complex clauses with ease. The when-clause and the concessive idea keep the meaning clear. When criteria are transparent, students can align study strategies with outcomeswhen combined with formative feedback and varied tasks, grades signal progress
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itOne accurate complex sentence links a claim to an as-clause. The control is consistent. This risk is real when assessment emphasises ranking over mastery
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise education words and natural collocations. They show a broad word range. intrinsic motivationformative feedbackacademic disciplineself-regulation
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly, including British forms. Two clear examples are shown. emphasisesprogression
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 210 words, which sits inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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