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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #48255 Profit
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Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Do you agree with that?

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Businesses should do anything they can to make a profit. Do you agree with that?
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The claim that firms should pursue profit by any means reflects a narrow view of business purpose. While profitability is essential for survival, I disagree that companies are justified in doing anything to achieve it. Sustainable profit depends on ethical conduct, legal compliance, and responsibility to wider stakeholders.

First, unrestricted profit seeking can generate serious social and economic harm that ultimately undermines firms themselves. Actions such as misleading advertising, labour exploitation, or environmental neglect may raise short-term returns, yet they erode trust and invite regulation and litigation. For example, a manufacturer that cuts safety standards to reduce costs risks recalls and reputational damage that destroy long-term value.

Moreover, businesses operate within societies that grant them resources, markets, and legitimacy, creating obligations beyond shareholders. When companies invest in fair wages, data protection, and environmental stewardship, they strengthen human capital and consumer loyalty, which supports stable growth. Critics argue that social constraints reduce competitiveness, but evidence from resilient brands shows that responsible strategies can align profit with public interest.

In conclusion, profit should be a goal but not an absolute licence. Companies that respect ethical boundaries and stakeholder responsibilities are more likely to achieve durable success than those chasing gains at any cost. Therefore, businesses should pursue profit intelligently and responsibly, not indiscriminately.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay states a clear position against the claim and backs it with a real example. The safety-standards example adds specific support. I disagree that companies are justified in doing anything to achieve ita manufacturer that cuts safety standards to reduce costs risks recalls and reputational damage
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses linking words to open and connect each idea. They keep the argument flowing in clear order. First,For example,Moreover,butIn conclusion,
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses complex sentences with concessive and relative clauses. The meaning stays clear and precise. may raise short-term returns, yet they erode trust and invite regulation and litigationbusinesses operate within societies that grant them resources, markets, and legitimacy
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itOne accurate complex sentence uses a when-clause with correct control. The grammar is hard to spot as anything but right. When companies invest in fair wages, data protection, and environmental stewardship, they strengthen human capital
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay chooses precise business words and natural collocations. These show a broad lexical range. ethical conductlegal compliancelabour exploitationenvironmental stewardship
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly, including British spelling forms. Two clear examples are shown. licencelegitimacy
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 211 words, which sits inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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