Loading question...
You are in free guest mode. Timed Practice Revision List Attempt History Progress Tracking Create a free account to unlock these tools
Prev Next
Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #45980 Conversation
Instructions

Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Do you agree with that?

* Write your essay below (between 200 and 300 words)

With a free account: Retry and compare every attempt.
Model Answer Perfect answer
Television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Do you agree with that?
Highlights
·

Each colour is one skill. Tap a colour to hide it. Tap it again to show it.

It is often argued that television has eroded interaction within households and social circles. While excessive viewing can reduce face-to-face exchange, I largely disagree that television has destroyed communication among friends and family. Its impact depends on patterns of use, social norms, and how content is integrated into daily life.

The strongest reason is that television frequently functions as a shared social activity rather than a barrier. Families who watch programmes together gain common topics, humour, and emotional reference points that stimulate conversation before, during, and after viewing. For example, discussing a documentary or drama episode can prompt debate, storytelling, and reflection, thereby extending communication instead of replacing it.

Critics argue that passive screen time displaces meaningful interaction, which is valid when viewing is solitary and excessive. However, this outcome reflects poor time management rather than an inherent property of television. When households set limits and prioritise communal viewing, television becomes a catalyst for interaction, unlike isolated devices that fragment attention and silence conversation.

In conclusion, television has not destroyed communication among friends and family; although misuse can weaken it. Shared viewing, guided choices, and reasonable limits allow television to support dialogue and social bonding. Therefore, the medium itself is neutral, and its communicative effect is shaped by how people choose to use it.

214 words
26/ 26
Perfect answerPTE Academic · Write Essay
Tap a highlighted sentence to see why it scores
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer disagrees that television has destroyed communication. A clear example about discussing a documentary supports this. I largely disagree that television has destroyed communicationdiscussing a documentary or drama episode can prompt debate
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses linking words to open paragraphs and join ideas. The order of points is easy to follow. For exampleCritics argueHoweverWhen households set limitsIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses complex sentences with ease. The relative clause and the comparison clause are clear and correct. which is valid when viewing is solitary and excessiveunlike isolated devices that fragment attention and silence conversation
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses a correct participle clause to add purpose. The grammar stays accurate. thereby extending communication instead of replacing it
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and natural collocations. This shows a wide vocabulary. face-to-face exchangeshared social activitypassive screen timesocial bonding
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct all through the essay. Longer words are handled well. reflectioncommunicative
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 214 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
Saving...