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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #45978 Consideration
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Neighbours are the people who live near us. A good neighbour should have some specific qualities. What is your advice? List some types.

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Neighbours are the people who live near us. A good neighbour should have some specific qualities. What is your advice? List some types.
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Because neighbours are the people who live nearest to us, deciding what makes a good neighbour is a practical concern. In my view, the most valuable qualities in the people next door are consideration, reliability and a readiness to help. My advice is that these specific qualities matter more than surface friendliness, since neighbours shape daily life for everyone who lives close by.

A considerate neighbour is the first type of person worth having, because such people respect the shared routines of those who live nearby. This type of neighbour avoids needless noise and recognises the boundaries of the people around them, a quality that matters greatly in crowded streets. For instance, warning the people next door before noisy repairs is exactly the specific consideration that good neighbours show. My advice, therefore, is to become the kind of neighbour whose quiet habits let other people relax at home.

A reliable and helpful neighbour is the second type that my advice recommends to anyone who lives among others. Such people follow local rules, watch out for safety and offer help, which are the qualities that turn strangers into trusted neighbours. Examples include accepting deliveries for the people next door or checking on vulnerable neighbours during bad weather. These specific acts, though small, reveal the reliability that every good neighbour and every settled community needs.

In conclusion, my advice is that the best neighbours are considerate, reliable and willing to help the people who live around them. Together, these qualities let very different types of people share a street in peace, so each neighbour benefits. Anyone who cultivates such qualities will become the sort of neighbour that the people nearby are grateful to have.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives clear advice on the best neighbour qualities. A real example about warning before noisy repairs supports it. the most valuable qualities in the people next door are consideration, reliability and a readiness to helpwarning the people next door before noisy repairs
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses linking words and clear paragraph openings. The ideas follow a logical order. In my viewFor instancethereforeExamples includeIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses complex sentences with ease. The causal clause and the relative clause are clear and correct. because such people respect the shared routines of those who live nearbya quality that matters greatly in crowded streets
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses a correct linking clause to add purpose. The grammar stays accurate. so each neighbour benefits
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise words and natural collocations. This shows a good vocabulary range. surface friendlinessrecognises the boundariestrusted neighbourssettled community
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout. British forms are used well. neighboursrecognises
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 282 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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