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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #45773 Money 2
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Some think it is better to enjoy our money when we earn it, rather than saving it for some time in the future. What is your opinion?

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Some think it is better to enjoy our money when we earn it, rather than saving it for some time in the future. What is your opinion?
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Debate persists over whether income should be spent immediately on enjoyment or reserved for future needs. While present consumption can enhance motivation and wellbeing, I believe prioritising saving is wiser overall, provided some controlled spending remains. This position reflects the realities of financial uncertainty, long-term goals, and the unequal timing of risks and rewards.

Saving offers security that discretionary spending cannot match. Accumulated funds protect individuals against job loss, illness, or sudden expenses, reducing stress and dependence on credit. Moreover, savings enable investment in education or housing, which can increase future income. For example, regular contributions early in a career compound over time, creating options that impulsive spending eliminates.

Admittedly, enjoying money as it is earned can deliver immediate satisfaction and support mental health. Experiences such as travel or hobbies may build social bonds and memories. However, unchecked consumption often adapts quickly, offering diminishing returns. Without saving habits, people remain vulnerable later, when earning capacity declines and postponed pleasures become unaffordable.

In conclusion, although reasonable enjoyment should not be denied, saving deserves priority over spending. Financial resilience, opportunity creation, and protection against uncertainty outweigh short-term gratification. A disciplined approach that saves first and spends deliberately allows individuals to enjoy the present without sacrificing stability and choice in the future.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer clearly states that saving is wiser than spending now. A real example about early saving supports this well. I believe prioritising saving is wiser overallregular contributions early in a career compound over time
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itClear linking words open each paragraph and guide the reader. The ideas move in a logical order. MoreoverFor exampleAdmittedlyHoweverIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses complex sentences with ease. The concessive clause and the time clause are handled well. although reasonable enjoyment should not be deniedwhen earning capacity declines and postponed pleasures become unaffordable
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses a correct relative clause to add detail. The grammar is accurate and hard to fault. which can increase future income
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay shows a broad vocabulary with precise academic terms. The word pairs sound natural. discretionary spendingdiminishing returnsFinancial resilienceshort-term gratification
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly. British spelling is used well. prioritisingwellbeing
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 209 words, which fits the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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