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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #45767 Care
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A study shows that women may need more care than men. TO what extent do you agree with it?

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A study shows that women may need more care than men. TO what extent do you agree with it?
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Claims that women may require more care than men often reflect differences in health risks and social roles rather than inherent weakness. Health policy should therefore consider variation without reinforcing stereotypes, and evidence-based planning benefits populations as a whole. I agree to a moderate extent, because biological and structural factors can increase women's care needs, although this should never justify unequal access or lower expectations.

First, women experience specific biological conditions that require sustained medical attention across the life course. Reproductive health, pregnancy and menopause involve complex physical and psychological changes that often need preventive screening, specialist monitoring and longer recovery periods. For instance, maternal health services are vital not only during childbirth but also before and after it, when complications frequently arise. Consequently, recognising these needs is practical and preventive rather than preferential.

Nevertheless, men face serious health risks that are sometimes underestimated. Higher exposure to hazardous work, substance misuse and delayed help-seeking contribute to poorer outcomes, especially in mental health. Some therefore argue that men need more care overall. While this view has merit, it does not weaken the original claim; instead, it highlights that effective care must be responsive to different patterns of vulnerability rather than identical for all.

In conclusion, women may need more care in certain domains because of biological and social realities, and acknowledging this supports better outcomes. A fair system differentiates support according to need, ensuring that both women and men receive appropriate, timely and respectful care.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a measured opinion and explains the reason. The maternal health example gives clear, specific support. I agree to a moderate extentmaternal health services are vital not only during childbirth but also before and after it
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay is well structured with clear linking words at the start of ideas. These devices help the argument flow. First,For instance,Consequently,Nevertheless,While this view has meritIn conclusion,
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with control. The 'because' clause and the 'although' clause add reason and contrast clearly. because biological and structural factors can increase women's care needsalthough this should never justify unequal access or lower expectations
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence with 'that' joins ideas correctly and reads smoothly. It shows control of complex grammar. women experience specific biological conditions that require sustained medical attention across the life course
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words. These terms show a broad vocabulary. preventive screeningspecialist monitoringhazardous workpatterns of vulnerability
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThe spelling is correct throughout these longer words. psychologicalchildbirth
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 244 words, which is within the required range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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