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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #45609 Convenience
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To what extent do you think that cashless transactions will replace traditional money?

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To what extent do you think that cashless transactions will replace traditional money?
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The rapid expansion of digital payments has prompted debate about whether cashless transactions will supplant traditional money. Although electronic systems are increasingly dominant in advanced economies, I largely agree that they will replace cash to a significant but incomplete extent. Clear structural advantages favour cashless use, yet concerns about inclusion, privacy, and resilience prevent a total disappearance.

First, cashless methods deliver efficiency, security, and traceability that physical currency cannot easily match. Instant transfers reduce transaction costs for firms and consumers, while digital records discourage theft and improve tax compliance. For instance, contactless payments accelerate retail queues and enable large-scale online commerce, reinforcing powerful network effects. As infrastructure improves and smartphone access widens, convenience continues to accelerate adoption.

Nevertheless, complete replacement remains unlikely because cash fulfils functions that digital systems struggle to replicate. Physical money supports anonymity, operates during power outages or network failures, and remains essential for older adults and economically disadvantaged groups. In emergencies or remote regions, cash provides immediate liquidity and trust, sustaining participation when technology is unreliable. These constraints cap the degree of substitution.

In conclusion, cashless transactions will displace traditional money across most routine exchanges, but they will not eliminate it entirely. Efficiency and convenience drive widespread uptake, yet inclusion, privacy, and system robustness justify retaining cash. A hybrid payment environment is therefore the most plausible long-term outcome.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a balanced opinion and explains the limit. The contactless payment example gives clear, specific support. I largely agree that they will replace cash to a significant but incomplete extentcontactless payments accelerate retail queues and enable large-scale online commerce
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay is well organised with clear linking words at the start of ideas. These devices make the argument flow. First,For instance,Nevertheless,In conclusion,yettherefore
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with control. The 'because' clause and the 'that' clause add reason and detail clearly. because cash fulfils functions that digital systems struggle to replicatethat physical currency cannot easily match
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis concessive sentence with 'Although' is built correctly and the meaning is clear. It shows control of complex grammar. Although electronic systems are increasingly dominant in advanced economies, I largely agree
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words. These terms show a broad vocabulary. network effectsimmediate liquiditytax compliancehybrid payment environment
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThe spelling is correct throughout these longer words. traceabilityinfrastructure
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 222 words, which is within the required range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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