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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #45608 Ocean exploration
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Do you think that ocean exploration is as important as space exploration?

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Do you think that ocean exploration is as important as space exploration?
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Debate persists over whether investigating the oceans merits the same priority as exploring outer space. I contend that ocean exploration is equally important, because it underpins environmental security on Earth and delivers immediate scientific and economic benefits while complementing space research.

First, the oceans regulate climate, biodiversity, and food systems, making their exploration vital for human survival. Mapping currents, deep ecosystems, and seabed geology improves climate models, disaster prediction, and sustainable fishery management. For example, better knowledge of coral and deep-sea habitats informs conservation strategies that protect coastal livelihoods. These outcomes address urgent planetary risks that space missions cannot mitigate directly.

Second, ocean exploration yields practical innovations and resources with near-term value, whereas space exploration often produces longer-horizon returns. Discoveries in marine biology inspire pharmaceuticals, materials, and renewable energy applications such as tidal power. Although space research advances technology and knowledge, prioritising oceans balances ambition with applicability. Moreover, insights from the sea complement space science by refining Earth observation and comparative planetary science.

In conclusion, ocean and space exploration should not be viewed as rivals; the oceans deserve equal importance. Their study safeguards climate stability, supports economies, and generates solutions with immediate impact. A balanced agenda that invests strongly in ocean science alongside space missions best serves humanity's future.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear opinion and explains the reason. The coral and deep-sea example gives specific support. I contend that ocean exploration is equally importantbetter knowledge of coral and deep-sea habitats informs conservation strategies
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses clear linking words to organise the ideas. These devices guide the reader through the argument. First,For example,Second,AlthoughMoreover,In conclusion,
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer handles complex sentences with ease. The 'because' clause and the 'whereas' clause add reason and contrast clearly. because it underpins environmental security on Earthwhereas space exploration often produces longer-horizon returns
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence with a participle phrase joins ideas correctly and reads smoothly. It shows control of complex grammar. the oceans regulate climate, biodiversity, and food systems, making their exploration vital for human survival
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses strong academic collocations. These phrases show a wide vocabulary. environmental securitydisaster predictionsustainable fishery managementcoastal livelihoods
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThe spelling is correct throughout, including the British form of this word. prioritisingconservation
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 209 words, which fits the required length. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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