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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #45605 Artificial lighting 
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What is your opinion on the impact of artificial lighting on wildlife?

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What is your opinion on the impact of artificial lighting on wildlife?
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Artificial lighting has expanded rapidly with urban growth, extending daylight into the natural habitats of wildlife. Clearly, in my view, excessive artificial light has a largely harmful impact on wildlife because it disrupts the biological rhythms of animals and alters fragile ecosystems. However, while artificial lighting supports human safety and activity, its ecological costs for wildlife are often underestimated by us.

First, the most serious effect of artificial lighting is the disturbance of the circadian rhythms that govern feeding, migration, and reproduction in wildlife. Indeed, many animals rely on natural light cues, and constant artificial illumination can confuse the orientation and timing of these creatures. For example, sea turtle hatchlings are drawn towards artificial streetlights instead of the ocean, and this reduces the survival rates of such wildlife. Consequently, this disorientation weakens animal populations over time and can shift the predator and prey relationships within affected ecosystems.

Moreover, artificial lighting also degrades habitats by changing animal behaviour and increasing the exposure of wildlife to threats. Furthermore, nocturnal animals may avoid lit areas and lose feeding grounds, while other creatures become more visible to predators. Although some argue that wildlife can adapt, such adaptation often favours a few tolerant animals, and this leads to reduced biodiversity across ecosystems.

Ultimately, artificial lighting poses a significant challenge to wildlife by disrupting the natural cycles and habitats of animals. Therefore, limiting unnecessary illumination and adopting wildlife-sensitive lighting designs can reduce harm to these ecosystems without sacrificing our human needs.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer states a clear opinion and explains why light harms wildlife. The sea turtle example gives strong, specific support. excessive artificial light has a largely harmful impact on wildlifesea turtle hatchlings are drawn towards artificial streetlights
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay is well organised with clear linking words at the start of ideas. These devices make the argument easy to follow. First,Consequently,Moreover,AlthoughUltimately,Therefore,
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer handles complex sentences with control. The 'because' clause and the 'that' clause add reasons and detail clearly. because it disrupts the biological rhythms of animalsthe circadian rhythms that govern feeding, migration, and reproduction
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis concessive sentence with 'while' is built correctly and the meaning is clear. It shows control of complex grammar. while artificial lighting supports human safety and activity, its ecological costs for wildlife are often underestimated
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise scientific and academic words. These terms show a broad vocabulary. biological rhythmscircadian rhythmsnocturnal animalsreduced biodiversity
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThe spelling is correct, including the British form of this word. behaviourillumination
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 245 words, which is within the required range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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