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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #44035 Artificial lighting
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What is your opinion on the impact of artificial lighting on wildlife?

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What is your opinion on the impact of artificial lighting on wildlife?
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Artificial lighting has expanded rapidly with urban growth, and this light now extends daylight deep into natural habitats. In my view, excessive artificial light has a largely harmful impact on wildlife because it disrupts biological rhythms and alters whole ecosystems. Although lighting supports human safety, we should recognise that its ecological costs for wildlife are often underestimated.

The most serious impact of artificial light is the disturbance of the circadian rhythms that govern feeding, migration, and reproduction in many animals. Because these creatures rely on natural light cues, constant artificial lighting can confuse their orientation and timing. For instance, sea turtle hatchlings are drawn towards streetlights instead of the ocean, and this light-driven disorientation reduces their survival. Such pressure weakens animal populations and can shift predator and prey relationships within affected habitats.

Furthermore, artificial lighting degrades habitats by changing behaviour and increasing the exposure of wildlife to threats. Nocturnal animals may avoid lit areas and lose feeding grounds, while others become far more visible to predators. Although some argue that wildlife can adapt, adaptation often favours a few tolerant creatures, and this bias reduces the biodiversity of our ecosystems. Such imbalance simplifies habitats and makes them less resilient to change.

Overall, artificial lighting poses a significant challenge to wildlife by disrupting the natural cycles and habitats that animals depend upon. Therefore, we should limit unnecessary light and adopt wildlife-sensitive lighting designs that reduce harm without sacrificing human needs. Such a balanced approach is essential if we want to protect the ecosystems and creatures around us.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear opinion about artificial light and supports it with a sea turtle example. This answers the prompt in depth. excessive artificial light has a largely harmful impact on wildlifesea turtle hatchlings are drawn towards streetlights instead of the ocean
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itClear linking words open and connect the paragraphs. This keeps the argument flowing logically. For instance,Furthermore,AlthoughTherefore,Overall,
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses complex sentences with 'because' and 'while' clauses. The meaning is clear and precise. Because these creatures rely on natural light cueswhile others become far more visible to predators
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis complex sentence with a relative clause is accurate. The grammar is well controlled. the circadian rhythms that govern feeding, migration, and reproduction
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses precise academic words and collocations about ecology. This shows a broad vocabulary. biological rhythmsfeeding groundspredator and prey relationshipswildlife-sensitive lighting designs
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout, including the British form 'recognise'. Words like 'circadian' are also correct. recognisecircadian
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 255 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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