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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #4357 Driverless cars R1
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Some people say that self-driving cars will be a benefit to society, while others believe they will cause more harm than good. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion using relevant examples.

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Some people say that self-driving cars will be a benefit to society, while others believe they will cause more harm than good. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion using relevant examples.
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The rapid development of autonomous vehicles has generated strong debate about their wider social impact. While proponents argue that self-driving cars can improve safety and efficiency, critics fear serious risks and unintended consequences. In my view, although challenges exist, the overall benefits to society are likely to be greater if the technology is managed responsibly.

Supporters emphasise that automated driving systems can significantly reduce road accidents caused by human error, such as fatigue or distraction. Machines can react faster than drivers and consistently follow traffic rules, which may lower rates of injury and death. In addition, self-driving cars could improve mobility for older people and individuals with disabilities, allowing greater independence and participation in daily life. For example, automated taxis could provide safe transport without relying on family members or public services.

On the other hand, opponents argue that this technology may create new dangers and social problems. System failures or cyberattacks could lead to large-scale accidents that are difficult to control. Furthermore, widespread adoption may threaten the employment of professional drivers, causing economic disruption. These concerns are valid, yet they largely reflect regulatory and transitional issues rather than permanent flaws in the technology itself.

In conclusion, self-driving cars present both risks and opportunities, but their potential to enhance safety, accessibility, and transport efficiency is more persuasive. With strict regulation, cybersecurity protection, and workforce retraining, autonomous vehicles are more likely to benefit society than cause harm.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay discusses both sides and gives a clear opinion that benefits are greater, and it supports this with an example about automated taxis helping older people. the overall benefits to society are likely to be greater if the technology is managed responsiblyautomated taxis could provide safe transport without relying on family members or public services
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses clear side-by-side linkers to present both views and the final opinion. In addition,For example,On the other hand,Furthermore,In conclusion,
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses concession and relative clauses with ease, keeping the meaning fully clear. although challenges exist, the overall benefits to society are likely to be greaterautomated driving systems can significantly reduce road accidents caused by human error
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis complex sentence uses a contrast link and a relative clause correctly and is difficult to fault. These concerns are valid, yet they largely reflect regulatory and transitional issues rather than permanent flaws
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise technology and transport words that fit the topic. autonomous vehiclestransport efficiencycyberattacksworkforce retraining
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout the essay. accessibilitypersuasive
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 236 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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