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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #43367 World population
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To what extent do you think that organic farming can feed the world population?

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To what extent do you think that organic farming can feed the world population?
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Organic farming is frequently promoted as a sustainable alternative to industrial agriculture, which leads to debate about its capacity to feed an expanding global population. I largely believe that organic farming can make a valuable contribution to food security, but it cannot meet worldwide demand to a great extent by itself.

One substantial limitation of organic agriculture is its generally lower crop yields when compared with conventional farming. In the absence of synthetic fertilisers and pesticides, farmers often need more land and time to achieve similar output, which is unrealistic in densely populated areas. For instance, organically grown staple crops usually produce smaller harvests, restricting their ability to satisfy large-scale consumption.

Advocates claim that organic systems enhance soil quality and biodiversity, supporting agricultural productivity over the long term. Although this benefit is important, it does not adequately address urgent hunger driven by rapid population growth and unequal distribution. Furthermore, organic production is typically more labour-intensive, which raises prices and limits accessibility for many low-income households.

In summary, organic farming can strengthen global food systems by promoting environmental sustainability and resilience. Nevertheless, because of yield limitations, extensive land use, and higher costs, it is not capable of feeding the entire world population alone. A blended strategy that combines organic methods with efficient conventional agriculture is therefore a more practical solution.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay gives a clear opinion that organic farming helps but cannot feed the world alone, and it supports this with a specific example about lower staple crop harvests. it cannot meet worldwide demand to a great extent by itselforganically grown staple crops usually produce smaller harvests
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itClear linkers open the paragraphs and order the points well. The reader can follow the argument smoothly. One substantial limitationFor instanceAdvocates claim thatFurthermoreIn summary
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with ease, including a relative clause and a concession clause. The meaning is completely clear. farmers often need more land and time to achieve similar output, which is unrealistic in densely populated areasAlthough this benefit is important
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence uses an in-the-absence-of structure correctly to give a condition, showing good control of complex grammar. In the absence of synthetic fertilisers and pesticides, farmers often need more land
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and strong word pairs that fit a topic on farming and food. food securitylower crop yieldslabour-intensiveenvironmental sustainability and resilience
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including the British form of this word. fertiliserssustainability
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 219 words, which is inside the required range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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