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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #41351 Ed system
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The qualities that a person needs to become truly successful cannot be learned at university or in a similar educational institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The qualities that a person needs to become truly successful cannot be learned at university or in a similar educational institution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Many people contend that genuine success depends on personal qualities that cannot be acquired through universities or similar institutions. I partially disagree with this claim, because although some attributes are shaped mainly by life experience, higher education can foster several essential qualities linked to long-term achievement. Success is therefore best understood as the result of education combined with individual commitment.

One crucial quality associated with success is disciplined analytical thinking, which universities actively cultivate. Through structured coursework, deadlines, and assessment, students learn to analyse complex issues, to organise time effectively, and to persevere under pressure. Completing demanding projects, for instance, requires strategic planning and sustained effort, both of which are directly transferable to professional contexts. Consequently, academic environments can reinforce habits that support achievement beyond formal study.

Nevertheless, it is also true that certain characteristics, such as emotional intelligence, adaptability, and intrinsic motivation, are difficult to teach explicitly. These traits often develop through real-world challenges, workplace setbacks, and social interaction rather than formal instruction. A graduate may have strong academic knowledge yet fail to progress if unable to cope with failure or collaborate productively. This limitation explains why education alone cannot ensure success.

In conclusion, I disagree to a moderate extent with the view that universities cannot teach qualities needed for success. While education cannot replace personal experience or inner drive, it plays a meaningful role in developing intellectual discipline and resilience. Truly successful individuals usually integrate academic learning with continuous personal development.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay gives a balanced but clear opinion that partly disagrees, and it supports this with a specific example about demanding university projects building useful habits. I partially disagree with this claimCompleting demanding projects, for instance, requires strategic planning and sustained effort
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itClear linkers open the paragraphs and show the two sides of the argument. This keeps the ideas well ordered. One crucial quality associated with successConsequentlyNevertheless, it is also true thatIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with ease, including a relative clause and a concession clause. The meaning stays clear throughout. disciplined analytical thinking, which universities actively cultivateWhile education cannot replace personal experience or inner drive
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence uses a relative clause correctly to add detail, showing good control of complex grammar. both of which are directly transferable to professional contexts
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and strong word pairs that fit the topic on success and education. emotional intelligenceintrinsic motivationintellectual discipline and resiliencestructured coursework
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including the British form of these words. organiseanalyse
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 243 words, which is inside the required range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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