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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #39168 Historical attractions
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Some people think foreign visitors should be charged more than local people when they visit the cultural and historical attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think foreign visitors should be charged more than local people when they visit the cultural and historical attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Many countries rely on cultural and historical attractions to represent national identity and support tourism. A common proposal is to charge foreign visitors higher entry fees than residents. I largely agree with this approach, provided it is applied transparently and kept within reasonable limits.

The strongest justification is economic fairness and sustainability. Local people already contribute to the preservation of museums, monuments, and heritage sites through taxation, while foreign tourists do not. Higher fees for visitors can therefore offset maintenance costs without increasing the burden on citizens. For example, revenue from international tourists can fund conservation work and visitor facilities, improving the quality of the attraction for everyone. This pricing model allows governments to protect fragile sites while continuing to offer affordable access to residents.

However, critics argue that differential pricing is discriminatory and may discourage tourism. This concern is valid if fees are excessive or poorly communicated. Nevertheless, modest price differences are common in transport and public services worldwide and rarely deter travellers who have already invested heavily in flights and accommodation. Clear explanations that higher charges support preservation can even enhance visitors' understanding of local responsibilities and values.

In conclusion, charging foreign visitors more than locals is largely justified because it promotes fairness and financial sustainability. When implemented carefully, it protects cultural heritage without undermining the tourism experience.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay gives a clear opinion that charging foreign visitors more is fair, and it supports this with a real example about tourist revenue funding conservation. I largely agree with this approach, provided it is applied transparently and kept within reasonable limitsrevenue from international tourists can fund conservation work and visitor facilities
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itClear linking words open the paragraphs and guide the reader from one idea to the next. This makes the argument easy to follow. The strongest justification isFor exampleHowever, critics argueNeverthelessIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with ease, including a conditional idea and a contrast clause. The meaning stays clear throughout. This concern is valid if fees are excessive or poorly communicatedwhile foreign tourists do not
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence joins two ideas correctly using a linking word, showing good control of complex grammar. Higher fees for visitors can therefore offset maintenance costs without increasing the burden on citizens
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and strong word pairs that fit the topic well. differential pricingeconomic fairness and sustainabilitycultural heritageaffordable access
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including the British form of these words. travellersdifferential
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 220 words, which is inside the required range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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