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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #39167 The newspaper 2
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The newspaper is no longer a need in modern society What is your opinion?

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The newspaper is no longer a need in modern society What is your opinion?
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In modern society, the consumption of news has shifted from printed newspapers to digital platforms across almost every community. I agree that the traditional newspaper is no longer a necessity in modern society, because its core functions are now delivered more efficiently through online media. Although the printed press still exists, in a contemporary society it has become a matter of personal preference rather than an essential requirement for an informed community.

Moreover, the primary reason is that internet technology gives the modern reader speed, range, and constant updates that a printed newspaper simply cannot match. For instance, online journalism, television, and radio report events within minutes and correct errors quickly, whereas a newspaper is fixed once the press has run. Consequently, this immediacy is crucial for modern society during crises or elections, when timely access to information directly shapes the judgement of the whole community.

Furthermore, another factor diminishing the relevance of newspapers in contemporary society is their heavy economic and environmental burden. Indeed, printing and distributing the press consume large quantities of paper, fuel, and labour, creating waste that harms the environment and making the newspaper less sustainable for society than digital alternatives. Admittedly, some argue that the printed newspaper encourages deeper reading and greater credibility within a community, yet this trust and audience engagement depend on editorial standards and journalism rather than the physical format.

Therefore, the newspaper has lost its essential role in modern society because digital media fulfils the same purposes for the community far more effectively. Ultimately, speed, accessibility, cost efficiency, and sustainability strongly favour online news, so while the printed press may survive as a niche choice, the newspaper is no longer needed in modern society.

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  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear opinion in "I agree that the traditional newspaper is no longer a necessity in modern society, because its core functions are now delivered more efficiently through online media". An example about online journalism reporting within minutes supports it. I agree that the traditional newspaper is no longer a necessity in modern society, because its core functions are now delivered more efficiently through online mediaonline journalism, television, and radio report events within minutes and correct errors quickly
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itLinkers like "For instance" and "Consequently" join the ideas, and "Admittedly" opens the balanced paragraph. The flow stays logical to the end. MoreoverFor instanceConsequentlyFurthermoreAdmittedlyUltimately
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe concessive sentence "Although the printed press still exists, in a contemporary society it has become a matter of personal preference" shows precise structure. A long yet-clause adds variety. Although the printed press still exists, in a contemporary society it has become a matter of personal preferencesome argue that the printed newspaper encourages deeper reading and greater credibility within a community, yet this trust and audience engagement depend on editorial standards
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe sentence "internet technology gives the modern reader speed, range, and constant updates that a printed newspaper simply cannot match" is grammatically clean and controlled. internet technology gives the modern reader speed, range, and constant updates that a printed newspaper simply cannot match
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itPrecise terms like "digital platforms" and "editorial standards" show a broad vocabulary. digital platformsimmediacyeditorial standardscost efficiency
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including "sustainable" and "credibility". sustainablecredibility
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 283 words, inside the 200 to 300 word range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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