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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #39165 Farmland 2
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Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important.

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Some people think that human needs for farmland, housing, and industry are more important.
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A debate persists over whether expanding farmland, housing, and industry should take precedence over protecting natural ecosystems. Although meeting basic human needs is essential, I argue that treating farmland, housing, and industry as more important than environmental protection is short-sighted, because long-term human welfare depends on healthy land, water, and biodiversity.

Firstly, ecosystems underpin food production and economic stability, so sacrificing them for agriculture and industry undermines the very goals of development that people pursue. For instance, intensive conversion of land into farmland degrades soil, increases flooding, and reduces pollinators, which ultimately lowers the productivity of agriculture itself. Moreover, unchecked industrial expansion near rivers can contaminate the water that both people and manufacturing rely on, raising costs for housing, cities, and industry alike.

Admittedly, growing populations genuinely require homes and employment, so delaying housing and industry projects can appear impractical to many people. However, prioritising nature does not require exclusion, because smarter planning integrates compact housing, brownfield redevelopment, and cleaner industry to meet human demand with a smaller footprint. Furthermore, such approaches protect habitats for people while still delivering jobs, infrastructure, farmland, and reliable food from sustainable agriculture. Therefore, government policy and careful urbanisation can reconcile shelter, housing, and manufacturing with strong environmental limits.

Consequently, human needs cannot be met sustainably by ranking farmland, housing, and industry above nature, since our economies and communities are embedded within these ecosystems. Ultimately, protection should guide every decision people make about farmland expansion, housing, and industry, so that society avoids short-term gains for human comfort followed by lasting environmental losses.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear opinion in "treating farmland, housing, and industry as more important than environmental protection is short-sighted". A concrete example about land conversion and lost pollinators supports it. treating farmland, housing, and industry as more important than environmental protection is short-sightedintensive conversion of land into farmland degrades soil, increases flooding, and reduces pollinators
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itClear openers like "Firstly" and linkers such as "Moreover" and "However" order the ideas well. "Ultimately" closes the essay smoothly. FirstlyFor instanceMoreoverAdmittedlyHoweverUltimately
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe sentence "prioritising nature does not require exclusion, because smarter planning integrates compact housing, brownfield redevelopment, and cleaner industry" shows precise structure. A relative clause adds variety. prioritising nature does not require exclusion, because smarter planning integrates compact housing, brownfield redevelopment, and cleaner industryunchecked industrial expansion near rivers can contaminate the water that both people and manufacturing rely on
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe clause "long-term human welfare depends on healthy land, water, and biodiversity" is grammatically clean and controlled. long-term human welfare depends on healthy land, water, and biodiversity
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itPrecise terms like "natural ecosystems" and "brownfield redevelopment" show a broad vocabulary. natural ecosystemsbrownfield redevelopmentbiodiversitysustainable agriculture
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including the British forms "prioritising" and "urbanisation". prioritisingurbanisation
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 257 words, inside the 200 to 300 word range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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