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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #39164 World history
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World history suggests that violence and conflict were more evident under male leadership than under female leadership. So, for peace to prevail, female leadership can be considered as a better option than male leadership.

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World history suggests that violence and conflict were more evident under male leadership than under female leadership. So, for peace to prevail, female leadership can be considered as a better option than male leadership.
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Historical narratives often associate major wars with male rulers, leading to the claim that female leadership is inherently more peaceful. While this observation has some surface appeal, I largely disagree that gender alone determines the prevalence of violence. Peace is shaped more by political structures, incentives, and accountability than by the leader's sex.

Firstly, violent conflict usually arises from economic rivalry, territorial disputes, or ideological competition, which constrain any leader regardless of gender. Female heads of government operate within the same military institutions and security pressures as men. For example, women in power have authorised armed interventions when national interests or alliances demanded it, demonstrating that context frequently overrides personal disposition.

Admittedly, supporters argue that women tend to favour negotiation, social welfare, and inclusive decision-making, which can reduce the likelihood of escalation. Such leadership styles may contribute to long-term stability in certain settings. However, these traits are not exclusive to women and can also be cultivated by male leaders through democratic norms and institutional checks.

Overall, associating peace primarily with female leadership oversimplifies the causes of conflict. Sustainable peace depends on governance quality, rule of law, and responsible foreign policy rather than biological differences. Therefore, promoting effective institutions and ethical leadership in all leaders is a more reliable path to reducing violence than prioritising gender alone.

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  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear position in "I largely disagree that gender alone determines the prevalence of violence". A concrete example about women authorising armed interventions supports the view. I largely disagree that gender alone determines the prevalence of violencewomen in power have authorised armed interventions when national interests or alliances demanded it
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itClear openers like "Firstly" and linkers such as "Admittedly" and "However" order the argument well. "Therefore" closes the essay logically. FirstlyFor exampleAdmittedlyHoweverOverallTherefore
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe sentence "violent conflict usually arises from economic rivalry, territorial disputes, or ideological competition, which constrain any leader regardless of gender" shows a precise relative clause. Another sentence adds range. violent conflict usually arises from economic rivalry, territorial disputes, or ideological competition, which constrain any leader regardless of genderthese traits are not exclusive to women and can also be cultivated by male leaders
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe comparative sentence "Peace is shaped more by political structures, incentives, and accountability than by the leader's sex" is grammatically clean. Peace is shaped more by political structures, incentives, and accountability than by the leader's sex
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itPrecise terms like "ideological competition" and "institutional checks" show a broad vocabulary. ideological competitionpersonal dispositioninclusive decision-makinginstitutional checks
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including the British form "authorised" and the word "governance". authorisedgovernance
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 216 words, inside the 200 to 300 word range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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