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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #38523 Multinational companies
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Some developing countries invite large multinational companies to open offices and factories in order to help their economy. However, others feel that foreign companies should be shut out, and instead, the government should help the local companies to contribute to economic growth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some developing countries invite large multinational companies to open offices and factories in order to help their economy. However, others feel that foreign companies should be shut out, and instead, the government should help the local companies to contribute to economic growth. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Many developing economies debate whether to attract multinational corporations or to shield domestic firms through state support. I largely agree that welcoming foreign companies is beneficial, provided it is managed strategically, because their presence can accelerate growth more effectively than protectionism alone.

The strongest argument for inviting multinational enterprises is their capacity to transfer capital, technology, and managerial expertise. Large firms often create stable employment, integrate local suppliers into global value chains, and raise productivity standards. For example, a foreign manufacturer establishing a factory can introduce advanced processes that local workers later apply across the economy. Such spillover effects expand exports, increase tax revenue, and strengthen infrastructure, delivering growth that governments struggle to generate independently.

Critics argue that foreign dominance can suppress local businesses and extract profits abroad. This concern is valid if governments neglect regulation; however, exclusion is a blunt and costly response. A more effective approach is to combine openness with targeted support for domestic companies, such as skills training, access to credit, and fair competition rules. When local firms are enabled to partner with or compete against multinationals, they can scale faster and innovate rather than remain sheltered and inefficient.

In conclusion, shutting out foreign companies risks isolating developing countries from global opportunities. I therefore largely agree with inviting multinationals, as long as governments simultaneously empower local enterprises to ensure sustainable and inclusive economic growth.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear position in "I largely agree that welcoming foreign companies is beneficial, provided it is managed strategically". A specific example about a foreign manufacturer and advanced processes supports it. I largely agree that welcoming foreign companies is beneficial, provided it is managed strategicallya foreign manufacturer establishing a factory can introduce advanced processes
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itParagraphs open with clear signposts like "The strongest argument" and "A more effective approach". Words such as "For example" and "In conclusion" keep the flow logical. The strongest argumentFor exampleSuch spillover effectshoweverA more effective approachIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe conditional sentence "When local firms are enabled to partner with or compete against multinationals, they can scale faster and innovate" shows precise, varied structure. A short conditional adds range. When local firms are enabled to partner with or compete against multinationals, they can scale faster and innovateThis concern is valid if governments neglect regulation
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe noun phrase "their capacity to transfer capital, technology, and managerial expertise" is grammatically clean and well formed. their capacity to transfer capital, technology, and managerial expertise
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itEconomic terms like "spillover effects" and "global value chains" show a broad lexical range. multinational enterprisesspillover effectsglobal value chainsmanagerial expertise
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including "strategically" and "productivity". strategicallyproductivity
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 228 words, inside the 200 to 300 word range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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