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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #38521 International travel
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International travel and tourism make people prejudiced rather than broad-minded. What are its causes and what measures can be taken to solve this problem?

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International travel and tourism make people prejudiced rather than broad-minded. What are its causes and what measures can be taken to solve this problem?
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Although international travel is often praised for making people broad-minded, tourism can paradoxically make travel prejudiced when encounters between visitors and hosts stay superficial or unequal. The problem arises not from international mobility itself but from the way tourism is organised and consumed for profit. Moreover, this essay argues that commercialised international travel and social segregation create prejudiced perceptions, and that education-focused measures can address these causes.

One major cause is mass tourism, which often limits interaction to scripted experiences that keep visitors distant and leave people prejudiced. For instance, tourists may stay in resorts, follow guides, and observe cultures as spectacles, so this travel encourages stereotypes rather than a broad-minded outlook. In addition, economic disparities between visitors and hosts can foster resentment, confirming the prejudiced assumptions that superficial international travel produces on both sides.

To address these causes, tourism should be reshaped so that international travel prioritises meaningful contact and cultural literacy. Furthermore, governments and tour operators can support small-scale, community-led tourism that requires longer visitor stays and shared activities. Therefore, one practical measure is pre-departure education that prepares people to interpret differences respectfully and become genuinely broad-minded rather than prejudiced.

Admittedly, international tourism does not inevitably make people broad-minded, especially when travel reproduces distance and inequality between visitors and hosts. Indeed, prejudiced attitudes emerge from shallow consumption of cultures and unbalanced encounters, yet these causes are not unavoidable for tourism. Ultimately, by promoting responsible tourism and informed visitors, international travel can become a genuine force that makes people broad-minded rather than prejudiced.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear opinion that tourism can make people prejudiced when contact stays shallow, shown by phrases like "tourism can paradoxically make travel prejudiced when encounters between visitors and hosts stay superficial or unequal". A concrete example about resorts and guides supports the point well. tourism can paradoxically make travel prejudiced when encounters between visitors and hosts stay superficial or unequaltourists may stay in resorts, follow guides, and observe cultures as spectacles
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itEach paragraph and idea opens with a clear linker such as "For instance" and "To address these causes". These many connective words guide the reader smoothly from causes to solutions. Moreover, this essay arguesFor instanceIn additionTo address these causesFurthermoreUltimately
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses long sentences with joined clauses, like "Although international travel is often praised for making people broad-minded". This shows control of complex language with clear meaning. Although international travel is often praised for making people broad-mindedAdmittedly, international tourism does not inevitably make people broad-minded, especially when travel reproduces distance and inequality
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe relative clause "which often limits interaction to scripted experiences that keep visitors distant" is built correctly and hard to fault. which often limits interaction to scripted experiences that keep visitors distant
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itPrecise academic words like "economic disparities" and "cultural literacy" show a strong word choice for the topic. mass tourismcultural literacyeconomic disparitiesmeaningful contact
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout, including the British forms "organised" and "commercialised". organisedcommercialised
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 254 words, which sits inside the 200 to 300 word range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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