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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #37664 Gender equality
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Despite all the advancement made by mankind, some people still argue that gender equality is a myth. What is your opinion?

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Despite all the advancement made by mankind, some people still argue that gender equality is a myth. What is your opinion?
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Despite all the advancement made by mankind, some people still argue that gender equality is a myth. In my opinion, gender equality remains more aspirational than real, because structural disparities between men and women persist in work and private life. Therefore, the claim that men and women now enjoy full equality deserves careful scrutiny.

The most compelling evidence lies in the labour market, where unequal outcomes for women endure despite formal rights. Women are overrepresented in lower-paid jobs and underrepresented in high-level leadership, and they are often penalised for career breaks linked to caregiving. For instance, promotion systems that reward uninterrupted availability favour male career patterns, so men keep pay and authority while women lose ground. These patterns show that opportunity is still shaped by gender rather than merit alone.

Admittedly, some people contend that education access and anti-discrimination laws prove that equality has largely been achieved. However, equal rules do not guarantee equal results when social expectations of men and women differ sharply. Women continue to perform a disproportionate share of unpaid domestic work, which constrains their time and professional development. Consequently, this invisible burden keeps many women financially dependent and weakens the practical impact of formal rights.

In conclusion, although the advancement of law and awareness is undeniable, it has not eliminated entrenched gender imbalances. Persistent workplace inequality and unequal domestic burdens on women demonstrate that equality remains incomplete. Therefore, in my opinion, gender equality is not yet a reality but an ongoing project that mankind must still complete.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer states a clear opinion that equality is not yet real. A strong labour-market example supports the view. gender equality remains more aspirational than realWomen are overrepresented in lower-paid jobs and underrepresented in high-level leadership
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay flows well with linking words at each stage. These devices guide the reader clearly. Therefore,For instance,Admittedly,However,Consequently,In conclusion,
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with when-clauses and contrast. This shows range and precision. equal rules do not guarantee equal results when social expectations of men and women differ sharplyalthough the advancement of law and awareness is undeniable
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis relative clause is joined correctly and reads smoothly. The grammar control is strong. the labour market, where unequal outcomes for women endure
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic vocabulary and good collocations. These words suit the topic. structural disparitiesanti-discrimination lawsunpaid domestic workfinancially dependent
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itAll words are spelled correctly, including British forms like these. labourpenalised
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 251 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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