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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #37434 Customs 2
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When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country. Others prefer to keep their own customs. Compare these two choices. Which one do you prefer? Support your answer with specific details.

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When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country. Others prefer to keep their own customs. Compare these two choices. Which one do you prefer? Support your answer with specific details.
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When migrants settle in a foreign country, they often face a choice between adopting local customs and preserving their original cultural traditions. Both responses shape integration and identity, yet they lead to different social outcomes. While respecting one's heritage has value, I prefer largely following the customs of the host society to achieve effective participation and mutual understanding.

Following the customs of the new country can significantly improve social integration. Shared norms in communication, workplace behaviour, and public etiquette reduce misunderstanding and build trust. For example, migrants who learn local manners and civic expectations are more likely to form professional networks and access opportunities, which help strengthen social cohesion and long-term stability.

By contrast, maintaining one's own customs helps individuals preserve identity and emotional security, especially within family life. However, exclusive attachment to original traditions may unintentionally limit interaction with the wider community. If newcomers resist adapting to shared norms, they risk social isolation and reduced employment prospects, even when their intentions are culturally sincere.

In conclusion, both approaches offer benefits, but adapting to the host country's customs produces stronger social and economic outcomes. By engaging with local norms while privately valuing personal heritage, migrants can contribute more fully to their new society. Therefore, prioritising the customs of the new country is the more practical and constructive choice.

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  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear preference and supports it with a real example. The view is the writer's own and it is well supported. I prefer largely following the customs of the host societymigrants who learn local manners and civic expectations are more likely to form professional networks
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe ideas follow a logical order and use good linkers. Each paragraph starts with a clear signal. For exampleBy contrastHoweverIn conclusion
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer handles complex sentences with ease. The while-clause and the conditional clause make the meaning clear. While respecting one's heritage has valueIf newcomers resist adapting to shared norms
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe complex sentence with a relative clause is accurate and hard to fault. It flows smoothly. which help strengthen social cohesion and long-term stability
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer chooses precise academic words and collocations. These terms fit the topic exactly. social integrationemotional securitysocial isolation
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout the essay. These words are spelled well. heritagecohesion
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 218 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four paragraph essay.
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