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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #37394 Imported food
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Some people think imported food exerts positive impacts on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some people think imported food exerts positive impacts on our lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Global food trade has expanded rapidly, making imported products commonplace in many diets. While some people hold sceptical views about dependency and environmental costs, I largely agree that imported food exerts positive impacts on our lives, because it broadens choice, stabilises supply and improves the health of many people when managed responsibly. Therefore, I disagree with those who claim that imported food is mostly harmful.

First, imported food enhances consumer choice and dietary quality by providing access to products unavailable locally. Seasonal fruits, specialised grains and diverse cuisines allow people to maintain balanced diets throughout the year, rather than relying on limited harvests. In particular, imported food improves the health of a growing world population that traditional local supply alone cannot feed. Moreover, this diversity encourages competition among food producers, which can reduce prices and raise quality standards, so the positive impacts reach ordinary lives.

Furthermore, international sourcing of imported goods strengthens food security by smoothing supply shocks caused by climate events or local crop failures. When drought or disease affects one region, imported food from other regions can prevent shortages and sharp price spikes. Admittedly, critics disagree and argue that imports undermine local farmers, yet targeted policy on tariffs and productivity can ensure that domestic products and imported food coexist rather than compete destructively.

In conclusion, despite legitimate concerns, the overall impact of imported food on our lives is clearly beneficial. By expanding choice, supporting good nutrition and enhancing resilience in food systems, imported products contribute meaningfully to daily wellbeing. Consequently, I agree that with sensible regulation to protect domestic agriculture, the positive impacts of imported food can be maximised, and the diets of modern societies can remain both varied and secure.

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  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear opinion and backs it with a real example. The view is the writer's own and it is well supported. I largely agree that imported food exerts positive impacts on our livesimported food from other regions can prevent shortages and sharp price spikes
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe ideas follow a logical order and use good linkers. Each paragraph starts with a clear signal. FirstMoreoverFurthermoreAdmittedlyIn conclusion
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer handles complex sentences with ease. The concession clause and the time clause make the meaning clear. While some people hold sceptical views about dependencyWhen drought or disease affects one region
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe complex sentence with a reason clause is accurate and hard to fault. It flows smoothly. because it broadens choice, stabilises supply and improves the health of many people
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer chooses precise academic words and collocations. These terms fit the topic exactly. consumer choicefood securitysupply shocksdaily wellbeing
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout, including British forms. These words are spelled well. scepticalstabilises
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 283 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four paragraph essay.
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