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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #37392 Cloning
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The role of human cloning has accelerated rapidly. To what extent you think will it replace the material things.

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The role of human cloning has accelerated rapidly. To what extent you think will it replace the material things.
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Advances in human cloning have intensified ethical and practical debate about its future role in society. Some argue that its rapid development could allow it to replace material things by offering biological alternatives. I largely disagree, because cloning focuses on living systems rather than material production, and its realistic applications remain limited and tightly regulated.

The most significant contribution of human cloning lies in medicine, particularly regenerative treatment and the potential replacement of damaged tissues or organs. Cloned cells could reduce dependence on donor transplants and improve recovery for patients with severe illness. Nevertheless, these developments do not replace manufactured goods, infrastructure, or digital technologies. On the contrary, medical cloning relies heavily on laboratories, specialised equipment, pharmaceuticals, and transport systems, showing that it functions within existing material structures.

Some proponents claim that cloning may reduce consumption of physical resources by replacing artificial implants with biological substitutes. Although this could lessen demand for certain devices, it would not remove the need for material inputs overall. Cloning requires advanced machinery, constant energy supply, skilled labour, and controlled environments, which collectively increase dependence on material resources rather than reducing it.

In conclusion, human cloning is very unlikely to replace material things to any meaningful extent. Its impact will remain confined to specific scientific and medical contexts, where it complements established technologies. Therefore, cloning should be viewed as a supportive innovation that enhances human capability, not a substitute for the material foundations of modern society.

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  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear opinion and explains it with a concrete point. The view is the writer's own and it is well supported. I largely disagree, because cloning focuses on living systemsmedical cloning relies heavily on laboratories, specialised equipment, pharmaceuticals, and transport systems
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay is well ordered and uses linking words to guide the reader. Each paragraph starts with a clear signal. The most significant contributionNeverthelessSome proponents claimIn conclusion
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer handles complex sentences with ease. The concession clause and the reason clause make the point clear. Although this could lessen demand for certain devicesshowing that it functions within existing material structures
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe complex sentence joining a claim and its limit is accurate and hard to fault. It flows well. it would not remove the need for material inputs overall
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer chooses precise academic words and collocations. These terms fit the topic exactly. regenerative treatmentdonor transplantsbiological substitutes
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout, including British forms. These words are spelled well. specialisedconfined
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 241 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four paragraph essay.
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