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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #37385 Big salary
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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?
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In the twenty-first century, there is a debate about work. Many people argue that a big salary matters far more than genuine job satisfaction. I strongly disagree with this opinion, because in my view, lasting career fulfilment outweighs raw income and financial compensation. Although a reasonable salary is important, satisfaction remains the deeper driver of wellbeing, motivation, and sustainable professional performance.

The first argument is that job satisfaction shapes daily engagement, productivity, and mental health far more reliably than pay alone. When people find their work meaningful, they generally stay motivated, develop new skills, and manage pressure and stress with real resilience. For instance, a nurse or an engineer who values recognition, achievement, and personal development often outperforms a highly paid but disengaged employee, whose income cannot offset chronic dissatisfaction at work.

Admittedly, supporters of a big salary point out that strong earnings deliver security, status, and lifestyle choices that no career should ignore. However, once basic financial needs are met, additional pay tends to bring diminishing rewards, whereas a positive work environment, fair recognition, and healthy balance keep motivation high. Consequently, an income-driven job that erodes wellbeing rarely secures the long-term satisfaction and retention that both employees and employers ultimately want from a career.

Ultimately, this argument convinces me that salary and job satisfaction are not equal, and that satisfaction deserves priority in any serious career choice. Furthermore, I believe fulfilment, purpose, and personal values sustain performance and productivity far longer than a large income can. Therefore, while adequate pay clearly counts, I firmly disagree that a big salary outweighs the deeper importance of satisfying, meaningful work.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay gives a firm opinion that satisfaction beats salary and develops it well. It states "lasting career fulfilment outweighs raw income" and supports it with the example of "a nurse or an engineer who values recognition, achievement, and personal development". lasting career fulfilment outweighs raw income and financial compensationa nurse or an engineer who values recognition, achievement, and personal development
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay is clearly structured with strong linking phrases. Words like "The first argument", "For instance", "However", and "Therefore" join the ideas smoothly. The first argument isFor instance, a nurseAdmittedly, supporters ofHowever, once basicTherefore, while adequate pay
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses concessive and relative clauses with ease. The "whereas a positive work environment..." contrast and the "whose income cannot offset" clause show good control. once basic financial needs are met, additional pay tends to bring diminishing rewards, whereas a positive work environmenta highly paid but disengaged employee, whose income cannot offset chronic dissatisfaction
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe complex sentences are accurate and hard to fault. The clause "When people find their work meaningful, they generally stay motivated" is correct. When people find their work meaningful, they generally stay motivated
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise workplace vocabulary and collocations. Phrases like "job satisfaction", "diminishing rewards", and "personal development" show a broad range. job satisfactionfinancial compensationdiminishing rewardschronic dissatisfaction
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThe spelling is correct throughout. Words like "fulfilment" and "resilience" are spelled correctly. fulfilmentresilience
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 268 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body arguments, and a conclusion.
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