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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #37236 Quality of life 2
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Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions.

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Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions.
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Many observers contend that living standards in major cities are declining rather than improving. Although urban centres continue to provide employment and services, daily wellbeing is increasingly eroded. In this essay, I will argue that congestion, housing pressure and environmental stress are the principal causes, and that aligned urban planning and targeted social investment clearly provide effective solutions.

First, the most significant causes stem from rapid urbanisation without adequate infrastructure. Overloaded transport networks, extended commuting times and persistent noise undermine physical and mental health. Moreover, escalating property prices push residents into cramped or distant accommodation, which weakens social cohesion. Air pollution and a shortage of green space further intensify stress, and modern technology often pushes people toward a sedentary lifestyle with poor fitness. Consequently, fast convenience food gradually replaces traditional home cooking, making urban life tiring instead of efficient.

To reverse this decline, authorities must therefore prioritise sustainable city management. Investment in public transport, mixed-use development and affordable housing can ease congestion and stabilise communities. Furthermore, environmental initiatives, including tighter emission controls and the expansion of urban parks, directly enhance health and comfort. In addition, spreading employment opportunities through stronger regional development can reduce pressure on megacities and balance population growth.

In conclusion, the falling quality of life in large cities arises mainly from unmanaged growth and environmental strain. These challenges undoubtedly demand integrated planning that aligns infrastructure, housing and environmental policy. When such measures are applied consistently, large cities can indeed remain productive while becoming healthier and more liveable.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay reframes the topic in the writer's own words and answers it in depth. It names the main claim in "congestion, housing pressure and environmental stress are the principal causes" and supports it with "escalating property prices push residents into cramped or distant accommodation". congestion, housing pressure and environmental stress are the principal causesescalating property prices push residents into cramped or distant accommodation
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe causes and solutions are set out in clear ordered paragraphs. Linking words like "First", "Moreover", "Furthermore", and "In conclusion" join the ideas well. First, the most significantMoreover, escalating propertyConsequently, fast convenienceFurthermore, environmental initiativesIn conclusion, the falling
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses relative clauses and concessive openings with ease. The "which weakens" clause and the "Although..." opener show varied sentence forms. which weakens social cohesionAlthough urban centres continue to provide employment and services, daily wellbeing is increasingly eroded
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe complex sentences are controlled and correct. The clause "that congestion, housing pressure and environmental stress are the principal causes" is well formed. I will argue that congestion, housing pressure and environmental stress are the principal causes
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay chooses precise academic words and collocations. Phrases like "rapid urbanisation", "social cohesion", and "sustainable city management" show a broad vocabulary. rapid urbanisationsocial cohesionsustainable city managementsedentary lifestyle
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThe spelling is correct throughout. British forms like "urbanisation" and "centres" are written correctly. urbanisationcentres
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 250 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, causes, solutions, and a conclusion.
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