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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #36965 Modified foods
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Genetically modified foods are becoming very widespread these days. While many believe they can help feed the world’s growing population; others are sceptical of their benefits. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Genetically modified foods are becoming very widespread these days. While many believe they can help feed the world’s growing population; others are sceptical of their benefits. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
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Genetically modified foods are becoming very widespread these days, and many people believe such foods can help feed the world's growing population. However, others remain sceptical of the benefits that these modified crops actually deliver. In this essay I will discuss both views about genetically modified foods and give my own opinion on their real benefits for the wider world.

Supporters argue that genetically modified foods offer clear benefits for a world facing rapid population growth. For instance, modified crops can be engineered to resist drought and disease, so farmers harvest more food from the same land. Consequently, cheaper and more abundant food may reach poorer regions where the population is expanding fastest. Moreover, some genetically modified foods are enriched with vitamins, which deliver real health benefits to millions across the developing world.

Sceptics, in contrast, question whether these benefits truly outweigh the risks that modified foods bring to the world. They warn that the long-term effects of eating genetically modified foods on human health remain uncertain. Furthermore, critics fear that a handful of corporations could control the food supply of the entire world population. Admittedly, small farmers may lose their traditional crops and independence, which could harm rural communities as the population grows.

In my opinion, genetically modified foods offer benefits that the world cannot easily ignore given relentless population growth. Nevertheless, I believe governments must regulate these foods carefully and fund honest research into their health effects. Ultimately, if strong safeguards protect consumers, genetically modified foods could feed a hungry world and support its expanding population responsibly for generations to come.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer discusses both views and gives a clear opinion with a real example. The thesis accepts benefits with safeguards, and the example shows crop gains. genetically modified foods offer benefits that the world cannot easily ignore given relentless population growthmodified crops can be engineered to resist drought and disease, so farmers harvest more food
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses clear linking words to open ideas and paragraphs. These keep the two views in a logical order. For instanceConsequentlyMoreoverin contrastFurthermoreNevertheless
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer handles complex sentences with relative and conditional clauses well. Meaning stays clear. if strong safeguards protect consumers, genetically modified foods could feed a hungry worldcritics fear that a handful of corporations could control the food supply
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence controls a relative clause accurately. The grammatical control is steady. some genetically modified foods are enriched with vitamins, which deliver real health benefits
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and collocations. These show a wide word range. population growthresist drought and diseaselong-term effectsstrong safeguards
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including the British form. These words are spelled accurately. scepticalwidespread
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 263 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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