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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #36656 Pets
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Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples.

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Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy. Which opinion do you agree with? Discuss both options and give examples.
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Whether children should grow up with pets remains debated, with supporters emphasising developmental benefits and critics warning about health and safety concerns. While potential hazards exist, I agree that keeping pets is generally beneficial for children when adults provide supervision, hygiene, and suitable animal selection. Overall, the advantages for emotional growth and responsibility outweigh the risks that can be effectively managed.

Pets can foster emotional wellbeing, empathy, and a sense of routine in young people. Basic caring tasks, including feeding or cleaning, teach children to consider others' needs and organise their time, which supports self-discipline in educational settings. For example, a child who helps care for a dog may gain confidence through companionship and shared activities, while regular walks encourage physical exercise and reduce feelings of isolation.

Nevertheless, critics argue that pets may expose children to bites, allergies, or infections, which is a reasonable concern. However, such dangers are rarely unavoidable. Vaccination, appropriate training, and clear rules about safe interaction substantially reduce harm. Moreover, choosing calmer animals, such as fish or small mammals, and maintaining household cleanliness can ensure that pets do not create an unhealthy living environment.

In conclusion, although keeping pets involves certain risks, these are largely controllable through responsible adult involvement. The educational, social, and emotional benefits for children are considerable and enduring. Therefore, I support the view that pets are good for children, provided families make informed choices and consistently prioritise safety and hygiene.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer states a clear opinion and adds a concrete example. The thesis supports pets with conditions, and the example shows real benefit. I agree that keeping pets is generally beneficial for children when adults provide supervision, hygiene, and suitable animal selectiona child who helps care for a dog may gain confidence through companionship and shared activities
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses varied linkers to open ideas and paragraphs. This keeps the discussion logical and smooth. OverallFor exampleNeverthelessHoweverMoreoverIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer handles complex sentences with relative and concessive clauses well. Meaning stays clear. the advantages for emotional growth and responsibility outweigh the risks that can be effectively managedalthough keeping pets involves certain risks, these are largely controllable
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence uses a relative clause accurately with no error. The grammar is under full control. teach children to consider others' needs and organise their time, which supports self-discipline
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and collocations. These show a wide word range. emotional wellbeingself-disciplineresponsible adult involvementinformed choices
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct, including British forms. These words are spelled accurately. emphasisingorganise
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 238 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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