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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #36569 Spending money
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Many governments in the world spend large amounts of money on art which helps to develop quality in people’s life. However, governments should spend money on other things rather than art. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

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Many governments in the world spend large amounts of money on art which helps to develop quality in people’s life. However, governments should spend money on other things rather than art. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.
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Many governments spend large amounts of money on art, which helps develop quality in people's lives, yet some argue this money should fund other priorities. I disagree with the claim that such art spending should be redirected, because sustained government investment in art enhances quality of life and serves wider development goals.

Public money for the arts improves everyday life by making cities more liveable and inclusive for ordinary people. For instance, museums, libraries, and theatres funded by government spending provide accessible spaces for learning, especially for lower-income people. Such publicly funded art lets citizens engage with creative experiences that would otherwise remain exclusive, strengthening social cohesion and mental wellbeing. In particular, community art programmes give young people a sense of identity and purpose that raises the quality of their life.

Opponents argue that limited government budgets should prioritise healthcare, housing, or transport over money spent on art. However, this presents a false choice, because government spending on art also produces measurable economic development and returns. For example, creative industries generate employment, attract visitors, and help renew declining urban areas, so art spending supports broader development. Consequently, cultural money can indirectly reinforce other public services rather than competing with them for scarce funds. Moreover, a society that neglects art risks losing the shared heritage and quality of life that give people meaning beyond material comfort.

Therefore, government money devoted to art is not an indulgence but a strategic investment in social quality and long-term development. By enriching daily life and contributing to economic vitality, public support for art complements the other priorities that governments must address. Ultimately, governments should continue to fund art alongside competing priorities instead of treating this spending as expendable money.

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  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a firm opinion and supports it with a clear example. The thesis defends art spending, and the example shows public benefit. I disagree with the claim that such art spending should be redirected, because sustained government investment in art enhances quality of lifemuseums, libraries, and theatres funded by government spending provide accessible spaces for learning
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses varied linking words to open ideas and paragraphs. This keeps the structure logical and smooth. For instanceIn particularHoweverFor exampleConsequentlyMoreover
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer builds complex sentences with reason and relative clauses easily. The meaning is fully clear. because government spending on art also produces measurable economic developmentcreative industries generate employment, attract visitors, and help renew declining urban areas
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence controls a subordinate clause with no visible error. The grammar stays accurate. a society that neglects art risks losing the shared heritage and quality of life
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and collocations. These show a rich word range. social cohesionmental wellbeingeconomic vitalitystrategic investment
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout the essay. These words are spelled accurately. liveableindulgence
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 284 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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