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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #36567 International news
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Some people think that secondary school children should study international news as one of the school subjects. Other people think that it is a waste of valuable school time. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Some people think that secondary school children should study international news as one of the school subjects. Other people think that it is a waste of valuable school time. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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Some people think secondary school children should study international news as one of the school subjects, while others regard it as a waste of valuable school time. In my view, structured study of international news is a worthwhile part of secondary education because it strengthens global awareness and critical thinking among students.

One strong reason is that international news helps school children understand the interconnected world these secondary students will soon enter. For instance, regular exposure to global current affairs develops geographical knowledge, civic literacy, and the ability to analyse information rather than absorb it uncritically. Studying international conflicts makes topics in the wider curriculum more concrete, so students see how classroom knowledge connects to real global events. In particular, secondary school students who follow current affairs build the media literacy needed to question sources and resist misinformation.

Admittedly, opponents claim that curriculum time is limited and should prioritise core subjects such as mathematics and science instead of international news. This concern is reasonable in examination-focused school systems where every subject competes for teaching hours. However, international news need not become a separate, time-consuming subject, because it can be embedded within existing school subjects such as geography or social studies. Consequently, teachers can weave global awareness into current lessons without weakening academic rigour or reducing preparation for assessments. Furthermore, secondary students who engage with international affairs often become more motivated, since the knowledge feels relevant to their own education.

Ultimately, teaching international news to secondary school children is not a waste of valuable time when it is carefully planned within the curriculum. By integrating global current affairs into existing school subjects, educators can broaden students' perspectives and still maintain high academic standards. For these reasons, international news deserves a place in secondary education rather than dismissal as a distraction.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay gives a clear opinion in its own words and backs it with a real example. The thesis says news study is worthwhile, and the example shows how it builds skills. structured study of international news is a worthwhile part of secondary education because it strengthens global awareness and critical thinkingregular exposure to global current affairs develops geographical knowledge, civic literacy
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe ideas flow in a clear order and each paragraph opens with a linking word. These devices guide the reader smoothly from one point to the next. For instanceIn particularAdmittedlyHoweverConsequentlyFurthermore
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with ease and clear meaning. The concessive and reason clauses join ideas smoothly. because it can be embedded within existing school subjectsThis concern is reasonable in examination-focused school systems where every subject competes for teaching hours
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe complex sentence uses a subordinate clause correctly with no errors. The grammar stays under full control. teachers can weave global awareness into current lessons without weakening academic rigour
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and strong collocations. These show a broad and confident word range. civic literacymedia literacyacademic rigourglobal awareness
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout, including the British form. These words are spelled accurately. analyseprioritise
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 299 words, which is inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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