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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #36047 Extracurricular activities
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‘Extracurricular activities are just a distraction from academic activities and bring students very few actual benefits.’ How far do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.

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‘Extracurricular activities are just a distraction from academic activities and bring students very few actual benefits.’ How far do you agree with this statement? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.
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Some people argue that extracurricular activities distract students from academic study and offer little real value. I largely disagree with this view because carefully selected activities can complement formal education and contribute to broader personal development without undermining academic performance.

The strongest reason is that participation outside the classroom builds transferable skills that academic lessons rarely cultivate fully. Activities such as public speaking clubs, sports, or volunteering strengthen teamwork, time management, and communication, which directly support academic achievement. From my experience as a student, involvement in a debate society improved my critical thinking and clarity of expression, which later enhanced my performance in written assignments and examinations. Rather than competing with study time, these activities often make learning more efficient by increasing motivation, discipline, and concentration.

Admittedly, excessive participation can distract students if it is poorly managed. Some learners may commit excessively to multiple activities, leading to fatigue and reduced study time. However, this problem reflects weak planning rather than the inherent value of extracurricular engagement. With reasonable limits and institutional guidance, students can balance commitments effectively. Schools that integrate activities into structured schedules help ensure academic priorities remain protected while students still gain wider benefits.

In conclusion, extracurricular activities are not merely distractions but valuable complements to academic learning. When undertaken in moderation, they develop practical skills, enhance motivation, and support long-term educational outcomes. Therefore, I strongly disagree that they bring very few actual benefits to students.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer states a clear opinion and backs it with a personal example. The debate society example shows how activities help academic work. I largely disagree with this viewinvolvement in a debate society improved my critical thinking
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe paragraphs open with connectors that add reasons and show contrast. These linkers guide the reader through the argument. The strongest reason isAdmittedly, excessive participationHowever, this problem reflectsIn conclusion, extracurricular activities
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with relative and contrast clauses smoothly. The ideas stay clear and precise. which directly support academic achievementRather than competing with study time, these activities often make learning more efficient
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence uses a conditional structure accurately with a clear result. The grammar is well controlled. When undertaken in moderation, they develop practical skills, enhance motivation
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and useful pairings. These choices show a wide vocabulary. transferable skillspersonal developmentclarity of expressioninstitutional guidance
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThe spelling is correct throughout. These words are written accurately. examinationscomplements
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 238 words, which sits inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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