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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #36046 Video technologies
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Doctors can now talk to patients through online video technologies. Do you think this is a good method of consultation and that it will replace face-to-face meetings between doctors and patients? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.

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Doctors can now talk to patients through online video technologies. Do you think this is a good method of consultation and that it will replace face-to-face meetings between doctors and patients? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience.
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Online video consultations are increasingly used in healthcare, allowing doctors to assess patients remotely. This method is beneficial for specific situations, yet it is unlikely to fully replace traditional face-to-face appointments. While digital consultations improve access and efficiency, in-person meetings remain essential for an accurate diagnosis and trust.

One major advantage of video consultations is improved accessibility for patients with mobility constraints or those living in remote areas. In general clinical practice, routine follow-up discussions, medication reviews, and minor symptoms can be managed effectively online, saving travel time and reducing pressure on hospitals. This efficiency allows doctors to prioritise urgent cases and allocate resources more strategically.

However, replacing face-to-face consultations entirely would be problematic. Physical examinations, diagnostic tests, and the observation of subtle symptoms often require direct contact. From practical experience, complex conditions such as chest pain or neurological complaints are better assessed in person, where immediate intervention is possible. Furthermore, in-person interaction strengthens doctor-patient rapport, which is vital for long-term treatment adherence.

In conclusion, online video consultations are a valuable addition to modern healthcare, particularly for routine and non-urgent care. Nevertheless, they should complement rather than replace face-to-face meetings, as direct examination and personal interaction remain critical for safe, effective medical practice. A balanced approach ensures both efficiency and quality of patient care.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a balanced opinion and supports it with a practical example. The point about chest pain shows why in-person care still matters. it is unlikely to fully replace traditional face-to-face appointmentscomplex conditions such as chest pain or neurological complaints are better assessed in person
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe paragraphs begin with clear connectors that show contrast and results. These linkers keep the argument organised. However, replacing face-to-faceFurthermore, in-person interactionIn conclusion, online video consultationsNevertheless, they should complement
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses complex sentences with contrast clauses in a smooth way. The meaning is always clear. While digital consultations improve access and efficiency, in-person meetings remain essentialwhere immediate intervention is possible
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence handles a relative clause accurately with correct verb forms. The grammar is controlled and clear. This efficiency allows doctors to prioritise urgent cases and allocate resources more strategically
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and natural pairings that fit the medical topic. These choices show a broad vocabulary. mobility constraintstreatment adherencedoctor-patient rapportdiagnostic tests
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itThe spelling is correct, including the British form. These words are written accurately. symptomsaccessibility
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 214 words, which sits inside the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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