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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #35400 Helping others
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We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our own communities and countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
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It is often argued that limited resources force societies to focus solely on domestic needs. Although no country has the capacity to help every person in the world, I largely disagree with the view that concern should stop at national borders, because global problems and moral responsibilities extend beyond local communities and directly influence national interests.

Many urgent challenges, such as climate change, pandemics, and forced migration, are inherently international and cannot be addressed in isolation. When affluent nations fail to support poorer regions in areas like disease control or environmental protection, negative consequences frequently spread across borders. For example, insufficient global health collaboration can lead to outbreaks that strain domestic healthcare systems and disrupt labour markets. In this way, international assistance acts as a preventative investment that safeguards national wellbeing, economic stability, and public safety over time.

Admittedly, governments have a primary duty to their own citizens, and domestic needs must be prioritised. However, an exclusively inward focus encourages isolationism, weakens diplomatic collaboration, and overlooks shared human responsibility. Such an approach can damage global trust, limit trade relationships, and reduce political influence, ultimately harming national prosperity and security. Countries that withdraw from humanitarian engagement often lose credibility in international negotiations to their long-term disadvantage.

In conclusion, while practical limits require governments to address domestic concerns first, this does not justify ignoring global responsibilities. Balancing national priorities with international support is both ethically justified and strategically wise in an increasingly interconnected world.

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  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer gives a clear position that concern should not stop at borders, and supports it with a concrete health example. This addresses the prompt in full. I largely disagree with the view that concern should stop at national bordersinsufficient global health collaboration can lead to outbreaks that strain domestic healthcare systems
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itLinking words open sentences and paragraphs to show examples, contrast, and results. They keep the ideas in a clear order. For exampleIn this wayAdmittedlyHoweverIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses complex sentences with reason and concessive clauses that flow naturally. The meaning stays completely clear. Although no country has the capacity to help every person in the world, I largely disagreewhile practical limits require governments to address domestic concerns first, this does not justify
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis sentence controls a list of results with correct grammar. The structure is accurate throughout. an exclusively inward focus encourages isolationism, weakens diplomatic collaboration, and overlooks shared human responsibility
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic words and natural word pairs. These show a broad vocabulary. forced migrationpreventative investmentdiplomatic collaborationinterconnected world
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct across the essay, including the British form of this word. There are no spelling errors. labour marketshumanitarian
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 242 words, which fits the 200 to 300 range. It is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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