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Young people's reading and writing skills can be influenced by the increasing use of computers and mobiles. Do you agree with it? Why?

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Young people's reading and writing skills can be influenced by the increasing use of computers and mobiles. Do you agree with it? Why?
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The rapid spread of computers and mobile devices has significantly reshaped how young people engage with language. I agree that this increasing use strongly influences their reading and writing skills. While digital tools offer new opportunities for literacy development, they also introduce patterns that can weaken traditional language competence if not managed carefully.

On the positive side, technology expands access to written content and encourages frequent interaction with text. Young people read messages, articles, and online resources daily, which can increase exposure to vocabulary and ideas. For instance, educational platforms and e-books allow learners to practise reading independently and at their own pace. Regular typing can also improve spelling awareness and speed, which are useful academic skills.

However, the influence is not entirely beneficial. Informal digital communication often promotes shortened words, emojis, and minimal grammar, which can transfer into academic writing. Constant multitasking on mobile devices may also reduce attention span, making it harder for students to read long texts critically. As a result, depth of comprehension and structured writing can decline despite high levels of screen-based activity.

In conclusion, computers and mobiles undeniably affect young people's reading and writing skills. Although they provide valuable resources and practice opportunities, their unregulated use can undermine accuracy and critical literacy. Therefore, guidance from educators and parents is essential to ensure technology supports, rather than replaces, strong language foundations.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer agrees that devices affect literacy and supports it with an example about educational platforms and e-books. I agree that this increasing use strongly influences their reading and writing skillseducational platforms and e-books allow learners to practise reading independently
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itLinking phrases open the paragraphs and connect the two sides smoothly. On the positive side,For instance,However,As a result,In conclusion,Therefore,
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses long sentences with relative and concessive clauses that stay clear. which can increase exposure to vocabulary and ideasAlthough they provide valuable resources and practice opportunities
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis complex sentence with a relative clause is accurate and hard to fault. Informal digital communication often promotes shortened words, emojis, and minimal grammar, which can transfer into academic writing
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise academic vocabulary and good collocations. literacy developmentlanguage competenceattention spancritical literacy
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout, including the British form of this word. practisecomprehension
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 226 words, which is within the 200 to 300 range, and it is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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