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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #35208 Hometown change
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Imagine one day that you have the power to change one thing in your hometown. What will you change? Please give specific reasons to support your answer.

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Imagine one day that you have the power to change one thing in your hometown. What will you change? Please give specific reasons to support your answer.
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If granted the power to change a single thing in my hometown, I would redesign its transport system to prioritise reliable public transit and safe walking. The town has grown rapidly, yet mobility across the city still depends on private cars. This one modification to how people travel would deliver broad social, economic and environmental benefits for the whole area. Crucially, such a change addresses everyday needs rather than symbolic projects.

The strongest reason for this change is daily efficiency and access across the town. For instance, congestion in the town wastes time, raises household costs and restricts access to jobs and education for residents without cars. Consequently, a frequent bus network with dedicated lanes and integrated timetables would shorten commutes and make opportunities reachable across every neighbourhood, strengthening labour participation and productivity in my hometown.

A second reason concerns the health and quality of life in the city. Indeed, streets designed for walking, cycling and shaded waiting areas encourage physical activity and reduce the air pollution and noise that harm the area. When children walk to school and older residents reach shops safely, public space across the city becomes inclusive. Admittedly, some argue that car-oriented roads are essential for commerce, yet well-connected transit corridors actually increase footfall for local businesses in the town.

Furthermore, if local authorities also improved hospitals, roads and the education system, this single change to transport would multiply the benefit across the place I call home. In conclusion, using the power to change transport is one intervention in my hometown with cascading effects, because reducing congestion, expanding access and improving health would reshape the city and prepare the town for sustainable future growth.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer picks one clear change and supports it with a specific example about congestion wasting time and limiting access to jobs. I would redesign its transport system to prioritise reliable public transit and safe walkingcongestion in the town wastes time, raises household costs and restricts access to jobs
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itClear ordering words and linkers open each paragraph and hold the reasons together. For instance,Consequently,A second reasonAdmittedly,Furthermore,In conclusion,
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses long sentences with time and concessive clauses that read clearly. When children walk to school and older residents reach shops safelyAdmittedly, some argue that car-oriented roads are essential for commerce
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis complex sentence with a participle phrase is accurate and hard to fault. would shorten commutes and make opportunities reachable across every neighbourhood, strengthening labour participation
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay shows a broad academic word range with precise collocations. public transitdedicated lanestransit corridorscascading effects
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout, including the British form of this word. prioritiseneighbourhood
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay is 278 words, which is within the 200 to 300 range, and it is a clear four-paragraph essay.
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