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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #35010 Child punishment
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Some say that parents whose children are breaking the law must be punished in some way. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some say that parents whose children are breaking the law must be punished in some way. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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Calls to punish parents for their children's criminal behaviour reflect concern about social responsibility and prevention. While parental influence is significant, I largely disagree that punishment is generally appropriate, except in narrow cases of proven neglect or facilitation. Responsibility should focus on targeted support and proportionate accountability rather than blanket sanctions.

First, children and adolescents possess developing judgement and autonomy, making sole parental punishment unjust. Even attentive families cannot fully control peer pressure, online exposure, or impulsive decisions. For example, a teenager involved in minor theft at school may act despite clear household rules, so penalising parents would misattribute blame and weaken trust between families and authorities.

Moreover, punitive policies risk perverse effects by discouraging collaboration and early intervention. Parents facing penalties may conceal problems rather than seek help from schools or social services. A limited exception is reasonable when adults directly enable offences or persistently neglect supervision; in such cases, proportionate sanctions linked to remedial programmes can reinforce responsibility without collective punishment.

In conclusion, broad punishment of parents for children's law-breaking is largely misguided and ineffective. Accountability should rest primarily with the offender, complemented by supportive measures that strengthen parenting capacity. Only where parental conduct demonstrably contributes to crime should authorities apply calibrated penalties, ensuring fairness while promoting prevention.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe essay states a clear position that punishment is mostly wrong and supports it with an example about a teenager and minor theft. I largely disagree that punishment is generally appropriatea teenager involved in minor theft at school may act despite clear household rules
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  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses clear linkers to open paragraphs and order the reasons. FirstMoreoverIn conclusionsoOnly where
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  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses concession and conditional style clauses to build complex sentences. While parental influence is significant, I largely disagreeA limited exception is reasonable when adults directly enable offences
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThis complex construction with a participle phrase is accurate and clear. making sole parental punishment unjust
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses precise legal and social words with good pairings. proportionate accountabilityblanket sanctionsearly interventionremedial programmes
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itWords are spelled correctly, including this word. adolescentssupervision
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 210 words and is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs and a conclusion.
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