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Practice Writing: Write Essay ID: #34496 Globalization
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Do you agree that globalization is important? Give reasons.

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Do you agree that globalization is important? Give reasons.
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Globalisation, the growing integration of trade and culture across borders, carries genuine importance for the modern economy. The importance of this trend rests on several reasons that touch business, communication and collaboration between nations. In an interdependent world, the reasons for embracing global exchange clearly outweigh the reasons for retreating into isolation.

Economic reasons form the strongest justification for its importance to trade and employment. Open trade is the central reason here, since it lets countries specialise, raise productivity and reduce prices for consumers. For instance, the importance of a global market lies in the way international business accesses skills and technology that no single nation holds. As incomes rise through such trade, governments gain the capacity to fund education, and these opportunities are compelling reasons in its favour.

Beyond the economy, further reasons for its importance appear in shared knowledge and collective problem-solving. Scientific collaboration drives innovation, while cultural exchange deepens mutual understanding for good social reasons. During shared challenges such as climate change or a pandemic, the importance of aligned global action becomes obvious for security reasons. Although critics cite reasons to fear inequality or cultural loss, responsible policy can address these reasons without abandoning international collaboration. Fair regulation therefore preserves the importance of open trade while softening the reasons behind such anxieties over diversity and inclusion.

In conclusion, the importance of global integration is difficult to dispute, because its economic and collaborative reasons are so substantial. From lower prices to shared innovation, the reasons confirming its importance extend across society and every community. With a sensible policy to manage its drawbacks, the reasons for engaging with the world far exceed the reasons for withdrawal. For all these reasons, global development retains lasting importance in twenty-first-century society.

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PTE criteria · full marks
  • Fully addresses the prompt in depth, showing full command of the argument by reformulating the issue in the writer's own words and expanding important points with specificity.
  • The argument is supported convincingly with subsidiary points and relevant examples throughout the response.
How this answer meets itThe writer clearly agrees that globalisation matters, saying "the reasons for embracing global exchange clearly outweigh the reasons for retreating into isolation". This is supported by "international business accesses skills and technology". the reasons for embracing global exchange clearly outweigh the reasons for retreating into isolationinternational business accesses skills and technology
PTE criteria · full marks
  • Has an effective logical structure, flows smoothly, and can be followed with ease.
  • The argument is clear and cohesive and developed systematically at length; a well-developed introduction and conclusion are present, and ideas are organised cohesively into clear, logically sequenced paragraphs.
  • Uses a variety of connective devices effectively and consistently to convey relationships between ideas.
How this answer meets itIdeas move in a clear order with linkers such as "For instance", "Beyond the economy", and "In conclusion". The reader can follow the argument easily. For instanceBeyond the economyAlthough critics citeIn conclusion
PTE criteria · full marks
  • A variety of expressions and vocabulary are used appropriately to formulate ideas with ease and precision throughout the response.
  • No signs of limitations restricting what can be communicated.
  • Errors in language use, if present, are rare and minor, and meaning is completely clear.
How this answer meets itThe essay uses complex structures with ease. The clause "since it lets countries specialise, raise productivity and reduce prices" shows good subordinate control. since it lets countries specialise, raise productivity and reduce pricesAs incomes rise through such trade
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  • Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot.
How this answer meets itThe concessive sentence "Although critics cite reasons to fear inequality or cultural loss, responsible policy can address these reasons" is accurate and well formed. Although critics cite reasons to fear inequality or cultural loss, responsible policy can address these reasons
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  • Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and collocations.
How this answer meets itThe writer uses precise academic words and collocations like "Scientific collaboration drives innovation" and "collective problem-solving". Scientific collaboration drives innovationcollective problem-solvinggrowing integration of trade and culture
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  • Correct spelling.
How this answer meets itSpelling is correct throughout, including the British forms "Globalisation" and "specialise". Globalisationspecialise
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  • Length is within the required 200 to 300 words.
How this answer meets itThe essay has 289 words and is a clear four-paragraph essay with an introduction, two body paragraphs, and a conclusion.
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